Reviews for Something Secret
Guest chapter 5 . 9/2/2014
Please update soon! Love it!
PandaYuki chapter 5 . 3/22/2014
Great story! Please continue.
Louve chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
Haaanw Yui is so cute *w*

The plot is really well done, the way you write the Shinsengumi guys is wonderfull and so is the relation between Saito and Yui (she is so lucky to have him as her uncle by the way.)

update soon pleeeeaaase !
PS : sorry for the mistakes I might have done, english is not my first language -'
OniKuShita chapter 5 . 3/4/2014
I like your story. The idea behind is not bad. Keep it up!
Yanagi-sen chapter 4 . 11/25/2012
I like the plot of this. It's something different and I'm looking forward to see where you go with it. A bit of constructive criticism... the in-text author notes are mostly unnecessary and distracting. You didn't have to say the horse was female... you said 'she' in the sentence. Logically the horse is female. Or with the scarf, you could have worked that into the sentence: 'Hajime recognized this as Yuki's scarf, a trademark of the family.' If you feel an author's note is essential... tack it on to the end so it doesn't disrupt the flow of the story. Good start though!
Akiko88 chapter 4 . 10/6/2012
hello to you!

and finally Saito - san's past is revealed!
Yuki is so cute and Saito is a fantastic uncle...

Please, guys, do somethin to stop that fool! before he's killed..

I wait your next update :)
bye byeeee
Guest chapter 3 . 9/26/2012
this is so good! plz continue!
Akiko88 chapter 3 . 9/13/2012
Hello to you!
Saitooo, what are you thinking?
Oh poor Yuki, don't cry... The Shinsengumi will helr uncle Hajime!

You're doing a very good job :) the idea of Yuki as Saito's nephew is really original...
Update soon! :)

bye byeee
Akiko88 chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
hello to you!

wow! this story seems very very interesting :)

Uncle Hajime? ahahaha..I can't wait to
Update soon!
Bye byeeee
Longstrider chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Ahhh! I love it! Please write more! :D