|Reviews for God Help Me|
| walker-baitxx chapter 4 . 9/27/2014
This is amazing, just as I pictured/thought the characters ought to be. I look forward to reading more, if you keep writing it (which you should).
| xXTinyMigetButts chapter 4 . 2/27/2014
No sexxxxxxxxxxx x
| Myradream chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
This is really good. I love that you included the mold in the crops. Awesome. Why did you stop writing? I would love to read more.
| Caroline Grace chapter 4 . 2/11/2013
I like this one too! The characters are written in the same spirit as the ones in the play; meaning they talk the way I image John and Elizabeth and Abigail would talk. And the feeling of tension in everything (especially in the Proctor house) is something you build really well.
I like the reference to the mould on the rye (you are referring to the ergot theory of what was going on in Salem, yes?)
Looking forward to more!
| 2340212 chapter 4 . 1/1/2013
Good story like it so far, nice to get into John Proctor's head and what he was thinking during this.
| kevinrunsfree chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Oh gosh, this is so lovely, I do hope you'll continue 3
| Clara Bright chapter 3 . 10/15/2012
This is very well written :) I always wondered what might have happened with John, Elizabeth and Abigail before the setting of the story :) well done, post the next chapter soon please! :)
| The Original Horcrux chapter 2 . 9/10/2012
Ah that was amazing! You've got Abigail, Parris and Johns personalization down perfectly and the dialogue was perfect and fitted in with the times perfectly! Can't wait for the next update :)
| The Original Horcrux chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Well technically I'm doing my History Elective homework :) (I have to read the Crucible but I've read it like six times... So I figured that Fanfiction would be the next best thing :) I really liked the beginning of this and I can't wait for the Abigail/John smut *ahem* I mean fluff.