Reviews for Rooftops and Invitations
Ae123monkey chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
This was an awesome one-shot!
I listened to the song, and it's now one of my favorites!
I like how you described emotions with this, leaving the reader to inference for themselves instead of telling them everything; I thought that that was really creative. I also liked how you slowly hinted (though it should've been pretty obvious) at the progression of their relationship. You also captured Shion's character SO WELL!
Any way...I wish there was a sequel to this story...
GREAT JOB!
DrYuriMom chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Oh wow! This is beautiful. Pasisonate. Honestly, you have a gift. If songs inspire you to write like this, keep listening!