|Reviews for Mrs Cratchit's Christmas|
| SunRise19 chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Very cool..I really like your stories. and, you wrote a book how amazing!
| finallyexploded chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
This is very nice story. Far greater than I could do.
I must salute you for your great story telling.
There were two tiny inaccuracies that stood out to me quickly, however.
One is the has from the sentence:
"It's Christmas morning and I'll wager Father Christmas has left something for each of you as you are such good and obedient children!"
Where the "has" can be deleted since it has no purpose.
and the "Soon they rose,"
Just delete the soon, and your story will be excellent.
But these are mistakes that a good author can easily forget.
Have a nice day.