Reviews for Falford Branch Line Adventures
Edhla chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
This sounds very interesting, and I certainly hope you get writing it :) Once you do, though, it seems to me that this chapter could probably be safely replaced with narrative. It's handy at first to know who is who, but I'd prefer, for example, to read about Bark being dumber than Ball from the things he says and does in the story (is he smarter or dumber than Wilbert? You have both)

Anyway, you seem to have thought this out very well. Good luck x