|Reviews for Fast Cars and Freedom|
| Guest chapter 18 . 5/6/2017
THIS IS INCREDIBLE! best spoby fanfic ive read :)
| itzme02 chapter 18 . 2/20/2017
| Emma chapter 8 . 3/20/2015
This chapter was amazing and brought me to tears. Keep up with an excellent job :)
| Hayley Jordan chapter 18 . 2/16/2014
These stories are great. I absolutely love them
| mrs-cavanaugh chapter 2 . 12/22/2013
i literally read this story every single day. if you ever delete it or something i will be devestated so please dont hahah!
| choose joy xox chapter 18 . 12/18/2013
This is 100% my favorite Spoby story on this site. Totally and completely. And like... you know I'd be super thrilled for that sequel haha. Either way, INCREDIBLE JOB. like so great that I think I'm just going to start all over again and reread it.
| Innocence121 chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
like omg your brain ok more on that later :p:
arghhhh i adored this part :
'Toby smirked. "I have a way to change that." he teased, leaning over her body and cupping behind her ear, covering her mouth with his.'
i love how the beach scene mirrors the beginning of FZ but also shows the development of their story and relationship it was so cute and flirty and argh perfect!
the scene of spoby and their friends just hanging are some of my favourites everrrrr!
Like hanna teasing spencer for being in school mode and spoby teasing about spencer when she plays games so damn adorable!
and ha ha using the wren line on spoby works so well too!
i love alot of scenes from alot of stories but the whole spoby dinner with spencers parents is my ultimate fav like everything, the way it developed, the whole toby standing up for spencer like spencer has never had that and just it was amazing.
'Spencer looked up distractedly and he saw the tears in her eyes. Immediately he set their plates on the coffee table and pulled her into his lap, hugging her. His sweet, caring gesture only made her want to cry harder. '
made me cry so damn much like toby is so damn perfect and the way he just knows what to do to make spencer feel better.
also how spencer was upset and toby cares for her that much that even not going for thanksgiving to his parents house wasnt as important as spencers feelings just argh true love man.
'"Which is why, my caffeine princess, I made it extra strong this morning. I figured you'd rise soon enough." Toby explained, pivoting their intertwined bodies so he could drag the mug over.'
gaaaah 'caffeine princess' i love it ha ha!
it warms my heart so much spencer waking up snugling upto toby whos just cleaning the kitchen table just bliss!
The couch make out before jenna interupted (grrr) was so brilliant ha ha .hot
i adore spencer and hannas friendship like im a major sparia fan but Spanna are adorable i loved spencer and toby trying to help and sort out the haleb relationship i love how you have incorporated the friendships into the story its so realistic and showing spoby dealing with it and seeing it cause problems between them for the ezria one too ultimately helps develop their relationship into the strong bond it is arghhh love it.
the scene showing the difficulty toby was feeling when they got too intimate
like i apologise for quoting your own paragraph but this was so good and just needed:
'"What happened with Jenna was so long ago now. I shouldn't still be haunted by her. I just want to move on. I was worried this would happen." he admitted, pulling her so they were settled against the headboard.
Something finally clicked for her. "Is that why you always slow us down when things start heating up between us? You were worried your past would get in the way…" she murmured, mostly to herself, finally understanding.
Toby looked guilty. He nodded. "Yeah… it's not that I didn't want to, trust me, it's all I could think about some nights. But I was nervous for what would come to my mind if we did."
Spencer placed her hands atop his. "Why didn't you just talk to me about it? We could've worked on a solution together. Instead you had me wondering if you even wanted me that way."
Toby, having looked so depressed the past few minutes, suddenly burst out laughing. "You're kidding, right? Spencer, every red-blooded male wants you that way."
Spencer shrugged her shoulders. "To me, it seemed rather plausible. I'm really skinny and not as chesty as some girls…"
Toby cupped her face in his hands. "Spencer, you are gorgeous. I meant what I said a few months ago. You have beauty beyond ninety-five percent of the population, like a muse. There's an elegance and gracefulness about you. You're long and slender and have a face that could sail a thousand ships. I find you irresistible, hence my lack of stopping us earlier. I… I want to take that next step with you, I really, really do, but…" he trailed off, looking torn.'
i adored it, it was such a important part of their relationship and finally they spoke about it and spencer revealed her insecurities and Toby explained how he was feeling and its brilliantly written and amazing!
The scene at the grandparents was so precious i could visualize how it went and spencer bonding with them and all of them being one big happy family just brilliant warmed my heart so much x
The christmas scene of both spencer and toby having that moment with their families the improvement, positive development was brilliant and what made it even better was that it was happening at the same time, it was a great mirror for them individually and together. So glad Melissa revealed everything but the Toby part of jenna admitting what she had done, and the scene with Toby and his father actually made me cry the way you wrote it, and the scene was so damn brilliant. You have no idea how i have wanted something like this, like how much it would mean for Toby on the show to have something like this, just im so happy that this happened, thank ya so much.
chapter 10 orgasm
enough said ha ha! blooody hell so bloody hot the spoby scene was and spencer in her 3x13 outfit *whistles* that dress was perfect for her and amazing how toby even when drunk asks for permission, his love runs that deep like brilliant x
i know i mentioned it before but adore the way ezria's rift was brought in and how it affected spoby and the way they dealt with it too!
I love Jason so much i miss him on the show and the way spencer found out he was her brother daamn ha ha definately a cliffhanger!
ha ha Spencer and her stubbornness you've captured it so well so glad she finally comes round to Jason being her brother, their relationship is precious!
Minin omg bringing in Keegans cat is genius and worked so well with the story spencer looking after minin whilst Toby was away was adorable!
And spoby getting arried gaaaaaaaaaaah Tobys proposal my babies like arghhhhhh
You mentioned there would be a sequel to FCAF are you still planning that?! like i know you most probably get a million prompts which you may do and are superbusy with life and work, but if you do a sequel to this let me know because i cannot wait for married spoby gaaah!
OK now back to your brain...
Like whats up with that your brain is magical like seriously how you brought this story from nothing and you are so creative that you have developed it so much, like how you think of these things i don't know, and writing so much, and every chapter just gets more and more creative and amazing! and you write so damn well whether its cute, flirty, sweet, or emotional, serious, pain or plain sexual ha ha brilliant at it all. You have a way of writing so i feel like im literally there in the story watching it all unveil and you are brilliant.
LIke bless you and your brain, in fact not just brain because Im sure alot of the writing comes from your heart too so bless your brain and heart i officially ship you with them
Trainart - yep TrAinArt is the official name for you, your heart and brain ha ha
ok ignore me im a lil cray cray!
but brilliant loved reading this and FZ i loved it, and i love you, like there arent enough words to explain how amazing you are mwhaaaah xxxxxxx
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/21/2013
Amazing chapter btw! So sorry exo_exo reposted "friend zone" onto wattpad!
| Guest chapter 18 . 9/6/2013
You have ruined me. Now I am never going to find someone as beautiful as Toby. Someone will ask me out on a date and I will be like, "U saw you step on an ant before, Toby wouldn't have done that. I never going to find the right one now. Although I am ruined this story was amazing it made me laugh cry and smile. You are an amazing author, and I can't believe I was lucky enough to read your book. Happy writing!
| crys chapter 18 . 8/30/2013
OMG! This whole story has made me want to cry! I loved it! You are truly amazing at writing! Please, please, please, make a sequel!
| Secretspobyluver chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Please write the next book thingy, Please
| paigiepoo11213 chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
Please post squeal ASAP im addicted
| arib1221 chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
this is my fav fanfic ever. i actually made this account so i could get updates on it! seriously obsessed. only on chap 5 right now, but...wow! you have such talent! how old are you? i want to be a writer, and i can only dream of writing like this.
| starry eyed dreamers chapter 18 . 6/24/2013
This story is the cutest thing ever! It's sweet and Spoby and interesting and fluffy Spoby. I liked how you didn't really add any Spoby conflict, because i get so into it and I hate hate hate reading it becuase my heart like breaks when I do. I liked how there was conflict between the couples, and how it wasn't resolved perfectly every time ( Emily and Maya). And the ending was just aww! I literally fangirled for like five minutes when Toby went down on one knee and it was the perfect ending. Dontcha wish somebody would do that for you? I would marry Toby too. I don't think you posted the sequel to this, but I await for it eagerly!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Sequel! Pleaseee! :D