Reviews for Try, Try Again
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2016
More please x
44Lefty chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Funny! You should write more stories like this!
fanficfantasies chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Nice... good job Dave. The 'clear your mind' thing would annoy me too, though.
DarkMousyRulezAll chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
XD hahahaha nice, very funny, and pretty well written!

domidomi chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Wow, will you finish this?
How would Balthazar react when something really dangerous happens?