Reviews for The Destruction
Guest chapter 4 . 10/27/2014
Ahh pulp fiction! :)
Guest chapter 12 . 2/1/2013
I really liked this one. Though I can't help but wonder how she kept this a secret till it was time to give birth. Wouldn't her family have noticed her gaining some weight?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Wow, that earthquake came out of nowhere! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Guest chapter 9 . 11/17/2012
The name micale remines
Me of micale Myers
That killer with
The white mask
Rember
Cw chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Hey I thought of a story for
You would you like
To hear about it
Agent BM chapter 7 . 11/10/2012
This is becoming more interesting every time I read it, update soon
Music Chaser chapter 7 . 11/8/2012
Interesting. Keep it up.

(We are the Brony Anonymous)
12/3/12
The-regular-adventureofgumball chapter 6 . 11/4/2012
Too much swearing
Agent BM chapter 6 . 10/27/2012
I like where this is going, i love it. Update soon
OmegaDelta chapter 6 . 10/26/2012
This will be good update soon
Agent BM chapter 4 . 10/12/2012
Please update this story soon
Unused Ac0unt chapter 4 . 9/20/2012
I like the story. But to make it better, I suggest you add some more details to the story. For example:

"My name is Gumball Watterson!" Said Gumball giving a salute. The guy looked at the young cat with a glare in his eyes.

"Well then, Gumball Watterson." The guy said. "Welcome to the team!" He said before strecthing his hand out with a grin on his face. Gumball hesitated a bit, but he then streched his hand as well and shaked it with the guy.

"Great! What do we do next?" Asked Gumball with a smile.

You see what I mean? But anyway, good luck with this. Brohoof! /)
coolfunnyman52 chapter 4 . 9/19/2012
i like the cussing. :3
EvelioandZgroup chapter 4 . 9/15/2012
A wow will be preceeding to say how this is defiantly a good story to read and stick around for the fun.
OmegaDelta chapter 4 . 9/15/2012
Wow a dark scene this will back fire on venum update when ever you can
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