Reviews for Flonne and Etna revenge
Mocha H chapter 3 . 6/4/2013
try to get a beta-reader.
they will help you to correct your words.
chronodekar chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Horrible formatting - looks like a gigantic wall of text. :(

-chronodekar
king of kings chapter 2 . 12/1/2012
more parts please
Guest chapter 2 . 10/13/2012
Not bad. Keep it up.
Banghg chapter 2 . 10/1/2012
Do not worry. I also I have problems with grammar.
The chapter came out excellent.
Banghg chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
It looks interesting.
Continuous.