Reviews for To Burn the Horizon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i think the moral of this story is "stop assuming mephisto is dead" |
![]() ![]() ![]() HEADS UP my hearts broken cause the sequel wont be finished so have fun if you wanna |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES PEP MY GIRL CAME THROUGH |
![]() ![]() ![]() This Tony and Pepper scene had me sobbING ! I knew she would have been the only one to believe in him from the start and Im so disappointed City in Texas wasn't able to believe in him 100% too... I hope she finds something about that girl or Im gonna hunt that kid down and burn her to ashes i s2g |
![]() ![]() ![]() This ending is so bitter, but this is probably how most conflicts end. Torn, bitter, wounded, down and out, tired. I adore this story, but I'm going to read the sequel, and hope that it is less heart breaking. This story is beautiful and touching, but so very sad and twisted as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what, wah |
![]() ![]() I love love love this so much. Rlly appreciate the song quotes at the end of each chapter:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is wonderfully written. It was gripping, tense, and most of all, it kept me constantly guessing. I had NO idea how it was going to end, and every time during it I had a million ideas of where it could go, and it NEVER went there. So unpredictable, so painful (in a good way - as in, you want to see everything be okay, but you know it's not going to). Purely amazing. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If there wasn't this AN about a sequel, I would have a breakdown right about now because I would never know whether or not you killed Loki. This story is AMAZING. I loved every second of reading it. Oh my god. Problem is, the seuquel appears to have been on hiatus since 2012. I'll read what's there after I got a little sleep, but already... any chance it will be continued? |
![]() ![]() Wow... great story. I really like the way you managed to let the "relationship" between Stark and Loki develop in a way that makes it seem possible. No OOCing, loads of action, still a villain to catch in the sequel (so looking forward to read that, because NOOOO LOOOKIII!)... great! Single point of critique: Some of the discussions between our heroes were a bit lengthy at times, but apart from that: wow! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't catch a break... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. |