Reviews for Light and Shadow
Guest chapter 5 . 5/19
I stopped reading around here bro the fact that he's so hung up on f****** Sakura I can't read it his retarded ass crush on Sakura in Canon is one of the things I do not like in Canon not Narutoverse so I don't want to read it in fanfiction.
yourfoxydope chapter 3 . 5/11
cringe
akirathewolflord chapter 24 . 3/21
I hope you pick this back up, it's a good story, a few errors but those are mostly messed up sentences like 1 or 2 repeated words like the sentence being started twice or missing a word here and there
electro prime chapter 10 . 3/18
chapter 10 the first part needs to be spaced out
L3onidas chapter 24 . 2/29
Always hate it when the last chapter is an authors note lol Hope you get back soon or have some material lying around on your computer that you can post
djtdagreat chapter 1 . 2/17
I'm holding out you may come back and keep going with it
mac1010 chapter 1 . 12/21/2023
your a good writer and the idea is good but HOLY ANGST fuck off bro stop crying and letting people bitch him around
bigdog21 chapter 24 . 10/18/2023
Really hope you come back to this story sometime. It has been one of my favorites for a long time. I always liked that the change from Canon naruto to this versions felt plausible to me. Grief can make someone into an entirely different person. Well here's hoping for an update some time in the future
hqjkat chapter 24 . 8/29/2023
i hope you can get back to writing it again. it was a good story.
Username6166 chapter 24 . 8/15/2023
I hope you come back to this one day
LizudemAm chapter 24 . 6/1/2023
What I like about this fic is you characterized your protagonists good. Nothing really felt illogical or idiotic. Everything that came close to "bothering" me were nitpicks I can easily ignore.
I really enjoyed this story so far and would love to see another chapter.
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 4 . 5/26/2023
Naruto doesn’t need the ring to fly
Simmonschr chapter 24 . 5/16/2023
can you hurry up and make more chapters of this fic I'm starting to get disappointed
jzblue chapter 5 . 5/11/2023
I keep rereading this story. soo good. I hope it continues soon
Mister nobody 23 chapter 2 . 4/27/2023
The planet's name ajnin is ninja spelled backward
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