|Reviews for Breakeven|
| Shuck chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
Paul just GETS HIM. He just understands. Behind that seemingly luggish visage he really, really gets Forrest and I just love that so much I cant
And Forrest's HURT AND HIS PAIN AND JUST BREAKING DOWN OVER HWOA AND fuck what WOULD HWOA SEE IN YOU FORREST HOW ABOUT ADORABLE SWEETBABY!?
Xiaoyuuuuu. I love Hwoa being irritated at the emotion of her. The chemistry is wonderful and the little detail of her hair being down now fffffffff and then HWOA IS THERE AND SHE KNOWS SHE JUST KNOWS AND ITS HILARIOUSLY AWKWARD.
Hwoa's scar, the image is adorable? Gosh i would kiss it if I were Forrest YAS
THAT'S RIGHT RUN AWAY TOGETHER THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKIN BOUT.
Ugh these two i am so SO sorry for not reviewing this fic sooner because i knew i would love it to pieces but ugh i am so bad with fic reading I actually haven't read much at all this year *crey*
anyway yas another 10000000 out of 10 fic from brawler stuffed into my faves yas yas yass
| Shuck chapter 2 . 8/26/2013
i am dumb and forgot to mention in the last review that 'Forrest catering to Hwoarang's needs' made me lawl because, you know, FORREST COOKS
THE LOVERS SPAT AND HWOA JUST FEELING HIM UP AS WAY OF A GREETING. fuc u hwoa
"The heckling boy from before was well and truly dead." - CREYS
I cant believe that lovescene jfc hwoa just takes him and then HES THE ONE heartbroken when Forrest rejects him. i swear in this chapter you can really get the hints that Hwoarang really, really cares, even loves, Forrest
"Forest's fever proceeds to skyrocket." - HA. HA HA HA HA. IT IS FUNNY BECAUSE f,n,d,df4 lawl
FORREST'S MOTHER THO. Brawler you legit made me angry at Baek like, I would SLAP HIM and scream at him and tell him how could he have been so brainless and you know how much I love the man jfc that was painful to read
*sly grin* u lyk crabbypatties dont u hwoarang?
Can u imagine hwoa/nomi/forrest and they are all screwing each other or is that what you're planning actually lawl
| Shuck chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
Because I'm a freakin' horrid person for getting around to reading fanfic here this is suppppppppper duper late
U KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE THESE TWO AND JFC I SHOULD HAVE READ SOONER SDJHGLKHGRLKHELKRGE
"Wouldn't expect anymore from you," Forrest murmurs as the distance between them grows with each stride. "A thug trained by a coward. No surprise there." -DAT BUUUUUUURN
"Hey, Juliet." - PISSING SELF
"Never had a mom to make me anything." - BB, BB NO
JFC the segment about Jin I am dead over this you can SMELL THE JINHWOA
poking him with his toe i fucking cant lfgkhsehrrye
"He can't believe..." through to "lovesick" - YOU MAY AS WELL HAVE STABBED ME IN THE HEART WITH FORREST'S WOK BRAWLER YOU MAY AS WELL
pfffffffft getting it on in an alleyway real classy hwoarang AT LEAST TAKE HIM TO A HOTEL U SICKO
ok ok jayyyysus i can see the Vertigo clear as day and this makes me SOOOOOO curious as to what you were initially planning: like what, Forrest becomes Hwoas right hand in the resistance or-? But yes god i love this. Your Hwoa is perfection and i swear to god i am so excited to see how you write these two in that vertigo-esque Nomi fic now I AM SO PUMPED
| Razer Athane chapter 3 . 1/8/2013
"For Razer" - fhudjshfkds dude you didn't have to!
The segment where Forest is listening/watching TV and getting updates etc fhdkjshfksdjfh8f ugh my kokoro. Its so... morose.
'When did I turn into my father?' - HNGH HNGH FHDJSHFKDSHFDSJFG
"It's not a girl."/ "Who's the guy, then?" - I REMEMBER THIS FROMT HE PREVIEW FDJSKHFKJSHFKJDSHFDSF
'picking and dropping lovers like dandelions' - This. This was beautiful. BEAUTIFUL.
'His Dad moves from the doorway, toward him, hand outstretched, and Forest practically flees upstairs.' - FEELINGS FJDHFKSDHFJHFDS
"I don't think I know what I wanted to begin with. What I was expecting." - I love this. And Hwoarang's appearance. And this. FHJDSKFDSJf
'The whites of Hwoarang's eyes spark as their gazes meet.' - FEELS ATTACK
'The skin running [through to] and looks away.' - JFKDJFLKDSHFKJDSF
"You better mean what you're saying," - HFJDHKFDSFGDS
'There is a shake in Hwoarang's body. It rattles through; a slight and barely definable shiver.' - HFJDHFKDSHFKDSF
AND THE END
GONNA ROLL AROUND OVER HERE IN FEELINGS OK
(and thank you
FOR THE FEELINGS)
| Razer Athane chapter 2 . 9/27/2012
YES YES YES YES YES
'Even in the great, untouchable cocoon of America, Forest feels it' - I love this like nobody's business
THIS WHOLE FIRST SEGMENT MY FEELS OK
'Forest, hearing of the news from Paul, hadn't slept, hadn't eaten, hadn't thought of anything else for those months.' - fhusdhfkjdsgfhjf
'The heckling boy from before was well and truly dead.' - fhjshdkajgfdsjhf
'He'd figured Hwoarang was hungry. / He always had been brainless.' - I love this. Its like Hwoarang is a stray cat that continuously comes to Forest's window for food hjfhsdkjg
'but this time Forest felt as if he was being devoured. All the flare and fire and friction came tumbling out of Hwoarang in that one moment, so starved he seemed, so rife with need.' - I love this hfkjdshfksdfg
'His expression. [through to] Shifting. One. Limb.' - ugugugughgjk
'Forest could sense the old barrier between them, creeping higher and higher, until it snapped shut and Hwoarang's eyes were glossed over with his old, beaten steel.' - fhjsahgjhdlkhdjf
"If she doesn't come back in one piece, then I'll see you in pieces." - YES
GOD YOU'RE GIVING ME SO MANY FEELS UGH
I shouldn't laugh but at Marshall having a low count I'm kinda dying at the minute. POOR MARSHALL.
'In the dark, they stare at each other.' - LOVE HFKJHDSKFHSDJF
'He used to sit here back when he was a kid, and be a spectator to his father's fights and Paul's rides and his mother's patients.' - fhjshdfksdf
THANK YOU FOR MENTIONING THE MISSING WING MIRROR HFJSHDKFFD
ugh feels FELHSFKJHSKDFJ I CAN'T OK RN I CAN'T happy birthday I CAN'T
| Razer Athane chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
I CAN'T TELL YOU HOW EXCITE I AM FOR THIS. Also, LOVE the title. GG HONEY!
'Starfish style' is the new Gangnam Style.
'until a string of mock clapping shatters the silence like lazy gunshots.' - YES YES YES
"A thug trained by a coward." - helP ME HFJHFDSFDGAFD
'He's never had a [through to] how alive he feels.' - fhjfsfdshgfadfda
INFERNAL HURRICANE OMG I LOVE IT
"You cook, right? Good. I'm starving." / "Not at two o'clock in the goddamn morning..." / "Yeah, well, now you do." - YES YES YES YES YES
"Master wants you to try this recipe. Somethin' about what his mom used to make." - fghfdkdsafg
I CAN'T COOK THAT'S WOMAN'S WORK THEREFORE BY HWOALOGIC FOREST IS A WOMAN
"Never had a mom to make me anything." - FEELS
'Forrest doesn't even budge.' - So I uh. That wasn't 'budge' to me for a bit there, it was 'bulge' and I was like "EXCUSE ME WHAT oh".
YEAH HE'S NOT AN OUTLET YA BITCH
'He can't believe he's [through to] lap then he needs to.' - SCREAMING WITH FEELS HJFSJGFDSHGDSF
The whole last seCTION I CANT I JUST CANT RIGHT NOW UPDATE AGAIN OK