Reviews for Three's Company
Define X chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Very cute. :) I love the last line: "Fine. Whatever. I've smuggled in a pack of cards, who wants to play?" You've got a great banter between these friends, and it's fun to read. I do think, though, that you're language is a little too... modern. ‘Merlin’ dialogue isn't exactly historically correct either, but this feels like a bit too much. That could just be me, though.