im very glad that i found this again

I just binge read this years later and I loved it. Great fic.

COULDN'T GET WITHIN 6 FEET OF CORNA you say very poor choice of words

Perfect, that's the only way to describe this. The more I read the more I want to keep reading. You show human emotions so well, every character gets enough screen time. You can easily get so attached to this masterpiece. I can keep going on on why this is great but I to do. Thank you for this story.

I can see Maka and Kid being close friends, especially siblings, from how overprotective Kid is with Maka.

I don't think Kami should have any rights to make conditions of her own, in order to let Maka move in with Soul. I mean, she left her child in the care of her cheating ex-husband. Even if she were to send her a postcard from time to time, she never helped raised her daughter for years.

In my opinion, I don't think Maka has to make any deal/agreement to her mother's condition. Only with Spirit's. Even when he makes terrible decision makings and isn't the ideal father... He still took care of his daughter and loves her very much. And since Kami abandoned her daughter, she basically forfeited her parental rights. Meaning, Maka could disregard everything Kami has to say and not have to meet the family her mother chose over her own daughter.

I'm just very surprised that Spirit is allowing/letting his ex-wife to make such requests... Seems rather sad/unsettling, if you think about it.

Woah this was your first fanfic?! This is incredible! I could really feel the charcaters in your story that it feels like im in it and i could see them and it really saddens me to read the last chapter of it. I really enjoyed every bits of it TuT... Thank you so much for this wonderful story!

This chapter made me so nervous... It made me want to slap Maka and snatch the pregnancy test from her just for me to know what's happening... I think i just got spared from a heart attack...

This actually caught me in a surprise... I didnt see this one coming... Its so sweet yet it hurts but its also gentle... Am i making any sense?

Aww... this hurts but also melted my heart in a good way...great way perhaps...i could really feel the characters emotions and sometime i forget they are maka and soul...they seem like different people but i still love it anyways 3

I can’t even

“I could wrap it up in two long chapters, but I’m not.”
Me: *Looks.*
*Sees there’s only two chapters left.*
bRuH.

Soul: Shit.

I friggin hate you

And now, the real drama begins.