Reviews for Untouchable
Sairey13 chapter 25 . 8/19/2019
I can see Maka and Kid being close friends, especially siblings, from how overprotective Kid is with Maka.
Sairey13 chapter 47 . 8/11/2019
I don't think Kami should have any rights to make conditions of her own, in order to let Maka move in with Soul. I mean, she left her child in the care of her cheating ex-husband. Even if she were to send her a postcard from time to time, she never helped raised her daughter for years.

In my opinion, I don't think Maka has to make any deal/agreement to her mother's condition. Only with Spirit's. Even when he makes terrible decision makings and isn't the ideal father... He still took care of his daughter and loves her very much. And since Kami abandoned her daughter, she basically forfeited her parental rights. Meaning, Maka could disregard everything Kami has to say and not have to meet the family her mother chose over her own daughter.

I'm just very surprised that Spirit is allowing/letting his ex-wife to make such requests... Seems rather sad/unsettling, if you think about it.
Guest chapter 65 . 7/5/2019
Woah this was your first fanfic?! This is incredible! I could really feel the charcaters in your story that it feels like im in it and i could see them and it really saddens me to read the last chapter of it. I really enjoyed every bits of it TuT... Thank you so much for this wonderful story!
Guest chapter 60 . 7/1/2019
This chapter made me so nervous... It made me want to slap Maka and snatch the pregnancy test from her just for me to know what's happening... I think i just got spared from a heart attack...
Guest chapter 44 . 6/30/2019
This actually caught me in a surprise... I didnt see this one coming... Its so sweet yet it hurts but its also gentle... Am i making any sense?
bianquita chapter 28 . 6/29/2019
Aww... this hurts but also melted my heart in a good way...great way perhaps...i could really feel the characters emotions and sometime i forget they are maka and soul...they seem like different people but i still love it anyways 3
Fanfics chapter 64 . 6/23/2018
I can’t even
Bruh chapter 63 . 6/23/2018
“I could wrap it up in two long chapters, but I’m not.”
Me: *Looks.*
*Sees there’s only two chapters left.*
I dunno chapter 59 . 6/23/2018
Soul: Shit.
Imma be a cow chapter 40 . 6/22/2018
I friggin hate you
Imma be a cow chapter 16 . 6/21/2018
And now, the real drama begins.
Imma be a cow chapter 12 . 6/20/2018
Is it sad that I cried when Kid left? I kinda wished that he stayed. I really liked him in this story. I could use a friend like him.
Peeved Person chapter 8 . 4/13/2018
Manga Fan chapter 1 . 4/13/2018
This is getting INTERESTING
Quick note:
I noticed Maka seems to be taken from other anime, like in RWBY Ruby isn't the strongest or he most powerful of her group but she is still the leader. Same with Maka. (watch soul eater to understand my point and RWBY) Also in fairy tail lucy doesnt have a mom and with maka's mom we just dont see her.
Also this:

Maka Chop!

Lucy kick!

See my point?
Wazzup chapter 65 . 3/21/2018
This is the best soma fanfic ever!
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