|Reviews for Untouchable|
| kyra.doxie chapter 24 . 11/29
the whole time reading the last chapter watch?vPrGq-pSvZg8
| glitteratti74 chapter 65 . 11/18
This is a story that really made my heart just explode. I'm sure that someday I'll be back here, reading it all over again, because... My God, it made me cry like a baby but also laughed like a drain... I totally love it with my heart and soul.
| TheCastorbean chapter 44 . 9/22
They say that boys fall for girls that are similar to their mothers...I wonder...nah.
| TheCastorbean chapter 28 . 9/22
So Wes, I have a question. You believe that is Soul's fault that your mother died but wouldn't it make more sense to blame your father because he was the one that got her pregnant? Probably not to your emotion-driven walnut brain. Daddy couldn't possibly be in the wrong. It's much easier to blame the little brother that you hadn't developed an attachment to yet.
Better yet maybe it's mom's fault for deciding to give birth to Soul. But of course that can't be the case, it's not like she loved her unborn child and wanted him to live or anything. Heaven forbid her being that compassionate and caring.
And another thing, applause for practically dedicating your life to making your little brother suffer. That makes you a class A asshole. I hope someone knocks all your teeth down your throat you stupid little prick.
IS WAY TOO EMOTIONALLY INVOLVED IN THIS STORY AND APOLOGIZES FOR THE RANT.
| Guest chapter 65 . 9/8
Thank u for finishing this story this is the first story that I truly love that has been completed thank u for not abandonning it
| WeightlessWriter chapter 6 . 8/14
"His black leather jacket that made him look super cool."
Am I the only one laughing really hard at this line?
| AWESOME 12M chapter 65 . 8/1
Awwwwwww That was the BEST fanfic ever it was sooooo romantic but sad why did it have to end *sniff,sniff* anyway loved the fanfic !I'm gonna go see if u made any other storys!
| AWESOME12M chapter 9 . 7/28
OMG ! OMG! SOUL JUST KISSED HER! AND SAID SHE BELONGED TO HIM ! OMG !SO FREAKING ADORABLE! I LOVE THIS FANFIC!SO FAR!(~.)
| LucyHunter chapter 1 . 6/17
OH MY GOD, THIS IS THE MOST INCREDIBLE STORY I HAVE EVER READ! When I saw it had 65 chapters I thought that this story might be good, and then when it ended, I was like NOOOOO MEEWWWWRRR PLZZZ.
Once it did end, I kept searching and searching for more stories like this. I just couldn't find anything that meets to this wonderful masterpiece!
| Guest chapter 65 . 6/16
I loved this. I could not believe that in the show soul and maka never got together and this story just completely satisfied me. It was great and I'm glad that it was written
| Anon chapter 65 . 4/12
Nice story, beautiful ending. It was long, showed a lot of progression in the characters well, and wouldn't really have any flaws if this story was just about two people, rather than Soul and Maka. The characters didn't exactly capture THE Soul and Maka, fic!Soul has this heartlessness and aggression about him that seems a bit uncharacteristic, and fic!Maka lacks that certain air of confidence and general "I'm Maka fucking Albarn" vibe. But well written in terms of story and plot, especially the whole thing with Asura, how you actually feel bad for him, and the way Soul start acting afterwards is just so well done, with the self-hate and everything. It isn't dragged, but its stressed enough so you can see that it has really effected him, and how guilty he feels.
All in all, good story, well written.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/17
This is the best thing ever! I really hope you know that you are just a great writer n I am so happy to have read this fanfic! This story brought me in tears n most stories don't do that .. You are such a great writer! I see some succes in your future ️️ Best SoMa fic ever made!
| Trinitastic chapter 65 . 3/12
I absolutely love this story! Im actually crying tears of happiness with the ending. Most of the time I don't like AU stories but this is the best fanfic I have ever read! Thank you for such a beautiful piece of work, and your gammer errors are fine... the story was AMAZING!
| The Author Haru chapter 8 . 3/3
I'm sorry but it says she shook her skirt off...is that a typo?
| The Author Haru chapter 2 . 3/1
SIXTY-FIVE CHAPTERS! YIPPEEEEEEEEE *very happy*