Reviews for The Wingless
XxXAdishoXxX chapter 1 . 1/26/2020
I love this so much please update soon I really want to see where this goes!
Lumberjanes05 chapter 1 . 2/24/2018
I like this! Are you going to continue?
M chapter 1 . 1/29/2018
Please update. This story interesting and adorable and I would like to see where it goes. I also love the idea!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2017
Loved it. Thought it was very cute. It was very well laid out. Just a quick comment from what I've seen of the deleted scenes and the interviews with the directors is that they intended for Jim to be quite the opposite and feel more comftable around kids than adults. That may be why you felt it was a little OOC other wise it was very heart warming.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2016
Hey i thought this was great! You should continue it !
Laurenx47 chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
Hey, I know it's been several years since you wrote this story but I found the the video this story is based on a few days ago after I just watched treasure planet for the first time and instantly fell in love with It and I love the first chapter you wrote so I would love to continue with it on my Wattpad account if it'd be okay. If you'd be okay with that could you message me on Wattpad my handle is Laurenx47
kairi102 chapter 1 . 3/14/2016
Hi Just wondering if this story is still on going :)
soundless-victory chapter 1 . 8/27/2015
this is a cute chapter to this story, I like it a lot :) It's funny, I went looking for Treasure Planet/Lilo and Stitch fan fics after I watched the "Broken" Video. I got to say this is really cute, and i would love to read more of it. LoveAndHeartbreak is so freaking talented, and I'm happy someone is writing a story about it! Can't wait to read more
princess Eavan3 chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
when are you going to make more :3
Princess Eavan3 chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
I hope u make more :3
princess Eavan chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
Love it :3
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
Ahh! Please update! You are such a good author! Please!
bying chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
I saw the video by LoveAndHeartbreak and it was amazing! I loved it! I'm so glad you took action and wrote a fanfiction based on the video! I'll look forward to more chapters! I noticed you haven't updated in a while...Please do! You're story has me hooked! :D
CelticRose93 chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
This is a cute beginning can't wait to read more on the story.
Rain of the Forest chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
WHAT! But Jim doesn't HAVE any wings...
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