|Reviews for Cheater, Cheater|
| MOLLY THE MONSTER chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
Now normally I don't like freeverse. I think they're usually very poorly done and kind of silly. But that being said, I rarely pass up the opportunity to read something Teddy/Dominique/Victoire related, so here I am.
This is one of the few freeverses that I actually liked. I loved the "Shh! Don't tell!" and then the little kids jokes "cheater, cheater, pumpkin eater" and "liar, liar, pants on fire." It just all fit very well. I think that's a hard thing to do. Not that I've tried it, I just think very few writers actually get it right. But I liked this.
I loved the juxtaposition between Dom and Victoire. Victoire in her pretty, flowery dresses and flat shoes and then Dominique in the fishnets and high heels. That's kind of how I imagine them. Very different. I feel like it's become sort of the cliche, like everyone thinks that about them. Including me. I have no idea why. Haha. But anyway, I feel like I'm rambling now. So I'll just say I really liked this. Nice job! c:
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
| Aaya Woods chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Oooh! Better not tell Tori! ;)
| JuliasDesire chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
I am in love with your style of writing! :3
Love Love Love it!
| weasleyjumper chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
I love it! Wow! It's extraordinary!
| BlameNargles chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Wow, I really like this. I'm slightly fixated on Teddy/Dom/Victoire triangles at the moment, and this is really good. I love some of the lines, 'his heat still belongs to Tori/but he's sold his soul to Dom', and 'but lying is such a nasty word/he's just.../lying'.
| kaminoko-x chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Whoaaah. You've written a lot of Teddy/Dom or Teddy/Victoire from the girls point of view... but not anything like this more centered on Teddy...
This, I really love this... especially the beginning.
| xXxVioletSkyxXx chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Excellent. Once again :D
I think the thing I liked most about it was the part where Teddy's 'heart still belongs to Tori, but sold his soul to Dom.' Very, very good. Loved it!