Reviews for The Line
Cloves chapter 2 . 9/2
Hahah i love progress. More
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28
This was so good. I wish good things never ended.
thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 8/23
its fitting that you end it with naruto passing the torch to the next generation
thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 8/23
the relationship is well done, but the friendship was better
thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 8/23
the time skips are well done, the story would drag on without it
thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 8/23
they work pretty well as friends, but if you make them as close as siblings it might make any relationship weird
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 8/23
freaky friday jutsu it is then, funny how walking a few miles in another's shoes will change you
Alex Ocean chapter 1 . 8/21
nice story
GodSaveTheQueen07 chapter 1 . 8/20
Good Job. It's a beautiful story !
tamagat chapter 4 . 8/12
holy mother of christ! THIS IS A MOST GUSH WORTHY STORY! BLLLARRGGHH!

okay moments gone...
but damn...
just damn...
Bearmauls chapter 2 . 8/6
I'm always rather annoyed at people getting on Naruto's case about doing what Mizuki told him to do. He's an academy instructor and a chunin, clearly someone Naruto is not only required, but has been trained to follow instructions from. And this is a ninja village, where compartmentalization of information is the norm, children are trained as professional assassins, etc. Is the idea of an internal security check style mission actually an unusual idea? This is the village that ordered Itachi to wipe out his own clan and he did it, and Naruto get's grief for stealing a scroll in a completely non-lethal way? :P

Am enjoying the story, though :)
deanine chapter 5 . 7/12
Lovely read
KurizuKurose2308 chapter 5 . 5/24
I love this fic
tdfztdfz chapter 1 . 3/27
This is a heartwarming story. I liked it
Winto-kun chapter 5 . 3/9
This was absolutely incredible. I'm a firm believer in Naruto/Hinata, but this story is pretty damn awesome.

Tsunade's death punched me in the gut. Like, really hard.
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