|Reviews for The Line|
| Cloves chapter 2 . 9/2
Hahah i love progress. More
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/28
This was so good. I wish good things never ended.
| thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 8/23
its fitting that you end it with naruto passing the torch to the next generation
| thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 8/23
the relationship is well done, but the friendship was better
| thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 8/23
the time skips are well done, the story would drag on without it
| thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 8/23
they work pretty well as friends, but if you make them as close as siblings it might make any relationship weird
| thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 8/23
freaky friday jutsu it is then, funny how walking a few miles in another's shoes will change you
| Alex Ocean chapter 1 . 8/21
| GodSaveTheQueen07 chapter 1 . 8/20
Good Job. It's a beautiful story !
| tamagat chapter 4 . 8/12
holy mother of christ! THIS IS A MOST GUSH WORTHY STORY! BLLLARRGGHH!
okay moments gone...
| Bearmauls chapter 2 . 8/6
I'm always rather annoyed at people getting on Naruto's case about doing what Mizuki told him to do. He's an academy instructor and a chunin, clearly someone Naruto is not only required, but has been trained to follow instructions from. And this is a ninja village, where compartmentalization of information is the norm, children are trained as professional assassins, etc. Is the idea of an internal security check style mission actually an unusual idea? This is the village that ordered Itachi to wipe out his own clan and he did it, and Naruto get's grief for stealing a scroll in a completely non-lethal way? :P
Am enjoying the story, though :)
| deanine chapter 5 . 7/12
| KurizuKurose2308 chapter 5 . 5/24
I love this fic
| tdfztdfz chapter 1 . 3/27
This is a heartwarming story. I liked it
| Winto-kun chapter 5 . 3/9
This was absolutely incredible. I'm a firm believer in Naruto/Hinata, but this story is pretty damn awesome.
Tsunade's death punched me in the gut. Like, really hard.