Reviews for The Line
hennessyswagg83 chapter 3 . 2/8
The Rookie 9 were 17 during the war except Naruto and Hinata being the youngest the war actually ended on Naruto's birthday
Cloves chapter 2 . 9/2/2017
Hahah i love progress. More
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2017
This was so good. I wish good things never ended.
thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 8/23/2017
its fitting that you end it with naruto passing the torch to the next generation
thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 8/23/2017
the relationship is well done, but the friendship was better
thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 8/23/2017
the time skips are well done, the story would drag on without it
thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 8/23/2017
they work pretty well as friends, but if you make them as close as siblings it might make any relationship weird
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 8/23/2017
freaky friday jutsu it is then, funny how walking a few miles in another's shoes will change you
Avid reader 11952 chapter 1 . 8/21/2017
nice story
GodSaveTheQueen07 chapter 1 . 8/20/2017
Good Job. It's a beautiful story !
tamagat chapter 4 . 8/12/2017

okay moments gone...
but damn...
just damn...
Bearmauls chapter 2 . 8/6/2017
I'm always rather annoyed at people getting on Naruto's case about doing what Mizuki told him to do. He's an academy instructor and a chunin, clearly someone Naruto is not only required, but has been trained to follow instructions from. And this is a ninja village, where compartmentalization of information is the norm, children are trained as professional assassins, etc. Is the idea of an internal security check style mission actually an unusual idea? This is the village that ordered Itachi to wipe out his own clan and he did it, and Naruto get's grief for stealing a scroll in a completely non-lethal way? :P

Am enjoying the story, though :)
deanine chapter 5 . 7/12/2017
Lovely read
KurizuKurose2308 chapter 5 . 5/24/2017
I love this fic
tdfztdfz chapter 1 . 3/27/2017
This is a heartwarming story. I liked it
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