|Reviews for Destiny|
| giogiu chapter 1 . 2/21
Do you plan to continue? It's a really good story!
| deaththekid1998 chapter 5 . 2/13
you should really continue this story, its really good
| bloodydarkangel chapter 5 . 11/11/2013
Amazing can't wait for the next update!
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/7/2013
Love this fic
| Baby Butler chapter 5 . 8/12/2013
Hi! I am a Hotsuma roleplayer and an avid fan of Uraboku and Hotsu/Shu pairing. I just read this five chapters of fanfic and I have to say I love your story. This might be an ideal way of how they were in the past life and I do love where this is going. I am patiently (and eagerly) waiting for your update of this story and do hope that you would still continue this. There are a lot more fans of this pair than you know and I am part of those fans. Thank you for making this fic!
| mangopudding chapter 5 . 8/10/2013
lol, Hotsuma is easy to trick when he panics, and those two finally have a talk that lasts :D
| Leiya chapter 5 . 8/10/2013
Again a nice chapter -
One part in me screams it goes on too slowly and I want Shuusei to see that Hotsuma is her Partner in every way possible, but the other part of me loves the speeding of the story. And it seems that Shuusei becomes a bit more... no, not open but... confident I think... when she talks to Hotsuma. I hope She'll learn to trust him soon.
So I'm really looking forward to the next part.
| hitomi65 chapter 5 . 8/10/2013
| Fireblaze1807 chapter 5 . 8/10/2013
Again... An awesome chapter :) ! I'm very happy that Hotsuma didn't follow her rule even if after their conversation and the manipulative side of shusei he decides to keep his promise finally :/, but I'm certain that shusei will talk to him more often. And an other part of her power is appear or it's a coincidence like she said. But I can wait the moment when shusei will very open her heart to hotsuma because for the moment she's reticent and keep secret from him even her name -'. Hope Hotsuma will not talk about shusei to her cousin this will be bad ... An shusei's cousin will stop flirt hotsuma even if he didn't notice or care haha XD. So continue your good fic, your style is very good and the story when I think can be real :) I will wait for the next chapter and be glad when I will see a email of updating
| LovelessDuchess chapter 4 . 8/9/2013
I love genderbend stories I do hope you continue this one. Your writing style is easy to follow so please update when you can. I know how life get pretty busy.
| Leiya chapter 4 . 7/21/2013
OMG *drowning in feels* q.q poor shuusei! I hope Hotsuma will get her out there quickly! She deserves a better life and the two of them belong together!
Really I absolutely like this story! You describe Shuusei great. Her inner conflict of wanting to be with Hotsuma and listening to her family's wish is very good, She is just too scared to get hurt even worse when she disobeys her orders and she does not have any self-confidence to cling to Hotsuma who would definetely save her.
So I think you wirite this very realistically and that's what i love about your story! Go on like this! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
| Fireblaze1807 chapter 4 . 7/17/2013
Hey it's been a while! this chapter is really awesome ... For the first time they made a real conversation even if a the end Shusei didn't tell him her true name -' but we can understand her decision with the family she have. So continue you excellent work and for me you don't have to write with a normal pace, I just want to read good chapters like the precedent :) I can't wait the next chapter, see you
| mangopudding chapter 4 . 6/28/2013
cant wait for the next chapter :)
| you-and-I-we-have-the-stars chapter 4 . 6/12/2013
Whaah, I was just thinking about thos story the other day! By the way, I have an account now so no longer reviewing as "guest", LOL.
Love Hotsuma's cleverness, getting Shusei's name first - well, he doesn't know it is a false one - and only then saying he won't keep the promise that got him her name. Which is good cause otherwise Shusei would indeed keep avoiding the other an dthen they would never get together!
Also adore how Shusei so is in control over Hotsuma and reads the boy so easily ... well, not completely cause otherwise she would have knows Hotsuma wasn't intending on promising to stay away from her if he got her name unless some part of her unconsciously did know and didn't inform her of this so she could keep bumping into Hotsuma cause all in all they brighten up her day those encounters. Even if some are muddy, LOL.
Also liked Hotsuma's determination to remain a Zweilt even despite the hardship he knew it would bring with it just as we touched a little on the reasons other people also didn't shy away from their Zweilt responsibility. That was cool and felt right.
I wonder what will happen now. Will Hotsuma catch her at an even later hour when he is watching the stars having snuck out for instance? Will people start to realize what is going on when Hotsuma starts to inquire about Shun-chan yet no one knows her and when he starts to describe her it fits Shusei? Will Shusei be caught sneaking back in way too late and get into trouble like this? Exciting! Hope you'll find inspiration and time for the next chapter soon!
| yuumon2 chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
Cuando vi que habías actualizado no podía creerlo, entre varias veces para ver si era verdad o una alucinación mía jeje.
Hermoso capitulo, me encanta como expresas los sentimientos de los personajes especialmente Shusei, sabes no se si estas interesada, pero tengo una cuanta en devianart donde he subido algunos dibujos de Shusei chica, bueno de hecho prácticamente todos mis dibujos son de shusei chica, si estas interesada en verlos te dejo el link (tu inspiraste algunos de mis dibujos de Shusei chica en kimono)
espero que actualices pronto de nuevo, me muero por saber que ocurrirá :)