|Reviews for countdown|
| shadow6689 chapter 6 . 12/30/2013
looks like it's been a whole year since you updated :( And here I was really getting into it when I ran out of chapters to read
| j.d.y chapter 6 . 12/28/2012
SUCH A GOOD STORY! Can't wait for another chapter
| StormKyrellFosten14 chapter 6 . 12/28/2012
NALU NALU NALU NALU NALU!
This was an epic chapter. The beginning was so amazing! I also loveGray's part in the story. He is one of my facorite characters, and you such a good job at writing about him. Please continue and Gray (sniffle) hang in there!
| StormKyrellFosten14 chapter 5 . 12/10/2012
Please Update soon!
| NalUlove4ever chapter 5 . 11/14/2012
OMG! what’s gonna happen! i’m too excited! please update soon :)
| PhoenixedDragon chapter 5 . 11/14/2012
Oh, man... You just love those cliffhangers, don't you?
I guess the following conversation bw Natsu and Lucy will be quite the emotional one. I liked the sense of comfort you have them in that last scene. It was very cute.
Damn, Erza! Why won't you share what you've learned with us readers, why!? lol.
Can't wait for the next chapter. I could say more, but I'm exhausted after a very busy day of work and school, but it was great.
| GoldenRoseTanya chapter 5 . 11/14/2012
| Yuni-sama chapter 4 . 10/30/2012
dammit... - update
| GoldenRoseTanya chapter 4 . 10/30/2012
| PhoenixedDragon chapter 4 . 10/30/2012
omg, I can't believe you left that with Erza right there! and where is Lucy? (could she actually sleep?) Only thing that keeps me going is knowing you'll explain stuff in the following chapter. Damn. This is just too much.
Really nice chapter, I love the mystery and the dread, and I can't help but feel for Lucy. She really did need to tell someone about her "condition", hope it's not so dismal as it looks from those countdown moments.
And that little moment when he's holding her hand was just cute! I love how overprotective he is of her...
| misstirius chapter 3 . 10/16/2012
Soooo tense! You sure know how to keep your readers on the edge. I'm excited to know what happens next! xD
| AquaTitaniaMiyuki chapter 3 . 10/14/2012
This story is great! Keep it up!
| GoldenRoseTanya chapter 3 . 10/13/2012
| PhoenixedDragon chapter 3 . 10/13/2012
That was a fantastic addition. I insist, a foreboding feeling haunts your narration and it works wonders. I love it. You have the characters perfectly in character. I'm really excited to see how the team will deal with the demons and a possible possessed Lucy. She's a very strong minded person and that has to affect how she reacts to the magic the demons are using. Same goes for finding out what is really going on in this cursed town.
Two minor things. One, Natsu's eyes are black, not brown. Two, the dates in the manga are not like ours. I know it's not a big issue, but disrupting the dates kinda messes up the feeling that we are in the Fairy Tail universe. X777 is when the dragons disappeared and Lucy's mom died, X784 when Lucy and Natsu meet, and X791 after the time-skip and the lifted Fairy Sphere spell. I think it'd help if you placed the story in the dates the manga uses.
Aside from that, looking forward to chapter 4.
| Betta Fische chapter 3 . 10/13/2012
I'm sorry you don't have that many reviews, but your story is ridiculously well-written and I'm drooling over the evolving plot. Seriously, bravo!
Now, if Lucy does become possessed or something, I just have a small request: Make her fight Natsu! X9
Anyways, don't stop writing and best of luck. You're doing a wonderful job and keep it up!