|Reviews for Fallen City|
| Bloody Carnage Princess chapter 4 . 10/3
Fuck yeah rode!
| Writer Of Worlds chapter 1 . 5/3
Heya, it's Dawn again. :)
Anyway, this is a lovely beginning. I love how calm and peaceful it was at the start... then everything went to hell at the end. That escalated quickly XD
There are a few errors in this piece, like:
"I don't want to be here anymore!,"
I think you should get rid of the comma after the exclamation point. But that's probably me XD
"They fleet to the dry grass..."
I think that should be flee, right?
Other than those, it's a good beginning. Definitely drew me in despite me having no idea what the fandom is.
Keep it up! :D
| Will of the Abyss - AllenxRoad chapter 13 . 4/11/2013
That was awesome! You should have see me freak out when I got the end of the last chapter and realized it was complete. I am waiting for the next season!
| pink9571 chapter 13 . 12/8/2012
| Guest chapter 13 . 12/7/2012
Can't wait for the next season! Good Job!
| pink9571 chapter 11 . 11/23/2012
This is good!
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/20/2012
I really like this pairing, the story is good, different from what I mostly see, and I can't wait to read more :D have a nice vacation!
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/9/2012
I really like the story. I hope you have a good vacation, and come back with more chapters! :)
| TANNtrum chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Post more chapters
| Glaux Bryonia chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
my, this sounds quite interesting :)