Reviews for You and Your White Horse
Zoey24 chapter 15 . 12/3/2016
Such a cute s story. So glad to see you finished it.
D. Leveille chapter 16 . 2/28/2016
Super cute ending and I'm excited that he went after her :D thanks for writing this!
D. Leveille chapter 13 . 2/28/2016
Yay, finally some honesty! Really enjoyed this one xD
D. Leveille chapter 8 . 2/27/2016
This was a really funny chapter, loved it! Poor Wickham at the end though :( I hope Sara will start being nicer to him.
Tenfangirl chapter 16 . 2/4/2016
Just found this - I adored Lost In Austen & I adored this. Thank you for writing a piece of heaven.
Boo4ME chapter 5 . 9/27/2014
I just have a problem with the whole George thing, he almost raped Georgiana. When I read Pride & Prejudice it was a real loooog time ago I skimed(?) it, really, but I know not to take rides from sex offenders.
Atlantean Pineapple chapter 16 . 9/8/2013
I love it! This is a great story and I really enjoyed reading it. And the ending is perfect, the dialogue of it amazing. My favorite is this:
He shrugged nonchalantly. "Because with all the trouble you get yourself into, someone needs to be your knight, and I thought I was doing a somewhat decent job." He paused, then added, "And I love you."
"But mostly that first reason?"
"Yes. Mostly that first reason."

You stayed true to the original while creating your own story. It wasn't simple insertion of a character, either, so it felt like a sequel, and it felt more real, true. Your character, Sara, was pleasantly human, without a personality that was too extreme one way or another, but a balanced mix of good personality traits and flaws. I didn't feel like she was trying too hard, and therefore didn't feel like you, as the author, were trying too hard to make her the perfect match for Wickham. You made her her own character, and in doing so made their romance not only possible, but believable. So many authors force unnatural personalities on their characters in order to move the plot along or create a relationship with someone, and in the process the character is defined only by the desire for that relationship. You avoided that very well, and it is a big part of what made this story so unique and so fun to read! I love that Sara didn't stay in Pride & Prejudice land, because she did have something she wasn't willing to give up, and that is part of what gives her character. Of course, I'm also very glad Wickham managed to follow her through, because let's face it- I wouldn't be a fan of Lost In Austen or Pride & Prejudice if I wasn't a sucker for a good old-fashioned happy ending.

And as much as I love this perfect ending, I wouldn't be upset if you decided to write a bit of a sequel about Wickham getting used to "our" world. ;) Just a little thought I'll go ahead and plant in your mind.

Thank you so much for the effort you put into writing this, and for sharing your work with us,
Atlantean Pineapple chapter 8 . 9/8/2013
What? Mr. Wickham has duties other than flirting with young ladies? Haha. Your story is very unique, and I am glad of that! It feels far more realistic than some others I've read. I wonder what's going to happen next...

Atlantean Pineapple chapter 6 . 9/7/2013
Entertaining, though I do wonder why Amanda didn't just tell Sara that Wickham wasn't like in the book, and that he didn't do anything to Georgiana. Realistically, she would have, though it would take away that tension between Sara and Wickham. I can understand why you might do it, but I think it breaks the reality of the story a bit. In any case, I'm excited to read the next chapter, and see what happens at dinner!

Atlantean Pineapple chapter 4 . 9/7/2013
I wouldn't want to go on a six hour carriage ride, but I suppose if I had to, this particular Mr. Wickham wouldn't be the worst possible company. ;) Still enjoying the story, and I like your portrayal of the characters, as well as your own character. Next chapter!
Atlantean Pineapple chapter 3 . 9/7/2013
Nothing much to say here except that I am still very much enjoying the story! And I'm off to read the next chapter!
Atlantean Pineapple chapter 2 . 9/7/2013
Another enjoyable chapter! I'd like to say again how much I love that you are starting after the events of Lost In Austen! As much as I love the movie, it's nice to have some completely fresh material to read.

Next chapter!
Atlantean Pineapple chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
I enjoyed this first chapter! It is well-written and I really like that you are starting it at the end of Lost In Austen instead of the beginning- your story is the first I've read that has done that. Off to the next chapter!

Classicgirl chapter 16 . 5/21/2013
Ohhh please do a sequal to this please i ould love read more
Lift the Wings chapter 16 . 4/18/2013
GAHHHH I LOVED THIS! It was absolutely fabulous :) great job!
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