Reviews for The Way Into A Demon's Heart
Moonlight Cosmic Angel chapter 16 . 3/3/2014
i liked it but wish there was more romance
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 16 . 11/18/2013
The ending shocked me a little bit and I wondered about Ciel because his and Sebastian's contract never ended, so I was wondering what happened to him.
MikaitoShion chapter 6 . 11/7/2013
god damn it Grell... -.-
Guest chapter 16 . 5/29/2013
I thought it was cute! :)
alexma chapter 16 . 5/23/2013
loved this story please update soon thanks
DigimonLover09 chapter 13 . 5/15/2013
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Paxloria chapter 15 . 5/10/2013
? But a deal is a deal and as a demon he is contractually obligated to take her soul, even if he no longer wants to.
Paxloria chapter 8 . 5/8/2013
Great chapter.
i'm surprised that she hasn't tried to punish Shelly's killer though.
From Grells remarks I can guess that its a demon.
Paxloria chapter 4 . 5/8/2013
Wow! sebastian is sure acting nice.
Black Michaelis chapter 16 . 3/5/2013
I am so sorry for the extremely late review. I got busy and yeah..

I'm so happy for yah, man! Good job for finishing your first story. I have tons of stories written in the past and most of them aren't finished.

Haahh.. that was a cute short story with no Mary Sue. Because most of the fanfics I read contains those annoying Mary Sue and OOC characters.
To be honest, you still didn't get the grip of SebbyPie's character (I should also say this to myself). But you're still young and learning. You'll improve and make more wonderful stories.

In the end, everything went in a fast pace. You really wanna finish this story, huh?
But anyway, good job and keep up the good work!
KijoKuroi chapter 16 . 2/18/2013
Hi! Love the story, but I wanted to let you know that in chapter 14 the song line "'Cause the Devil's got your number tonight" should be "'Cause the Devil's got your number NOW". I adore MCR, and I love that you used so much of them in this fic, and especially love the Danger Days album, so I wanted to let you know :). Now I'm off to read your Killjoy fic!
MissHikaHaru chapter 13 . 2/9/2013
you have no idea how long this took me to read, i was just too busy going off into squee's and fits of giggles :3
MissHikaHaru chapter 8 . 2/9/2013
aaaahh Sebby is so cute in this chapter 3 I love this fic, it's so brilliant!
Silver-PenofTime chapter 16 . 2/8/2013
This was very well done! I liked it a lot! Glad I found it! Keep it up, because you have a talent for this. Let me know when you do more. Allons-y! Silver
Barely Meeting Expectations chapter 2 . 1/20/2013
XD haha you used Koop! lolz
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