Reviews for Kira Fate 2
Pink ranger 13 chapter 17 . 5/2/2016
It's a great story
kurie-tibiti chapter 10 . 3/5/2013
This story seems a bit interesting but your use of the word "would" is over done its in almost every sentence. You also used past tense and current tense as well a couple times. I think your story could benefit from full sentence structures and maybe a bit more detail. Over all though the flow of the story works well.
VRmaster300 chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Good ending, and on reaching 150 reviews.
Gohan Videl fan 489 chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Wow a good ending to a sweet fic.
Saiyan Videl fan 99 chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Cool so they all got a happy ending well that is good.
dragonball z fan 300 chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
sweet man I'm sad this is it but I can't wait to read your next fic.
Sakura fan 55 chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Nice man this is good ending.
NaruSaku fan 100 chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Awwww very sweet.
super saiyan Sakura Haruno chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
kick ass that was a good ending I just wish this is what could have happened
lost fan don chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Oh I did enjoy the rid sweet fic :D
Rocketshipping fan chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Nice man I love the baby names.
May Drew 4every chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Cool Star is so sweet.
Rose Contestshipping fan88 chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
sweet man I hope that is you ever do another one they all meet up or are at least good friends.
Ryan 9901 chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
wow I love the ending it was good that Flay had a little girl and did the other three mothers.
Lucy the pokeshipping fan chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
sweet man this was a nice ending to the story
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