Reviews for Kira Fate 2
kurie-tibiti chapter 10 . 3/5/2013
This story seems a bit interesting but your use of the word "would" is over done its in almost every sentence. You also used past tense and current tense as well a couple times. I think your story could benefit from full sentence structures and maybe a bit more detail. Over all though the flow of the story works well.
VRmaster300 chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Good ending, and on reaching 150 reviews.
Gohan Videl fan 489 chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Wow a good ending to a sweet fic.
Saiyan Videl fan 99 chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Cool so they all got a happy ending well that is good.
dragonball z fan 300 chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
sweet man I'm sad this is it but I can't wait to read your next fic.
Sakura fan 55 chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Nice man this is good ending.
NaruSaku fan 100 chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Awwww very sweet.
super saiyan Sakura Haruno chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
kick ass that was a good ending I just wish this is what could have happened
lost fan don chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Oh I did enjoy the rid sweet fic :D
Rocketshipping fan chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Nice man I love the baby names.
May Drew 4every chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Cool Star is so sweet.
Rose Contestshipping fan88 chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
sweet man I hope that is you ever do another one they all meet up or are at least good friends.
Ryan 9901 chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
wow I love the ending it was good that Flay had a little girl and did the other three mothers.
Lucy the pokeshipping fan chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
sweet man this was a nice ending to the story
Kevinrock8899 chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
whoa man very sweet ending to this story oh and if you have any ideas you like to see in Pokemaster story which also has Kira and Flay in it sned him a PM he may take it.
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