Reviews for Eyes on Me
Margot-Eve chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
xD aww poor Kotetsu... xD loved it! so hilarious! xD
sak chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Hahah! Good one! I wonder about her hair colour too, so clever question Kotetsu

This was good, the ending cute as well and everyone in character.
The writing style was a little like a diary so I had to think if Karina was recalling a memory or living in the moment.

"If it hadn't been for Barnaby"
"Had it not been for Banaby's chicken pox"
"Thanks to Barnaby being sick..."

Just a few ways to change your sentence about that

Good luck and thanks!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2012