Reviews for Forgive Me, Father, for I Will Sin
gracefish21 chapter 23 . 1/11
rclaurel chapter 23 . 1/11
Well Looking from Edwards point she was dancing sexy with a man even if he is gay, she is in a relationship with Edward. would it be ok if Edward was dancing like that with another women How would Bella feel
NY13 chapter 23 . 1/11
dude has some issues...
FranRichards chapter 23 . 1/11
Bella needs to take some responsibility for what happened. Even if her friend was gay,it did look sus to anyone that was watching just because she knew he was gay doesn't mean everyone else did, especially Edward.
tas62 chapter 23 . 1/11
Not sure she will rush to forgive him.
lovepotionsbrewer chapter 23 . 1/11
Great chapter - you really captured both B & E's feelings. I feel so bad for both of them. :-(
debslmac chapter 23 . 1/11
Poor Edward. He didn't know
Mistydeb chapter 23 . 1/11
Oh dear, she is gonna be so pissed when she wakes up. I wonder how long she will make him wait before she listens to his explanation. I hope paul is ok, poor guy. Debbie
2brown-eyes chapter 23 . 1/11
I hope when she calms down she realizes how bad it would look from his point of view.
tulips3 chapter 23 . 1/11
He was wrong to act that way but I can see why he could be upset. Watching someone doing that to Bella would be tough. Looking forward to their talk.
tff000 chapter 23 . 1/11
TMart37 chapter 23 . 1/11
I hope it's a rational discussion between them. They BOTH have to admit their faults on this one. Obvious Edward has issues he still needs to deal with regarding his failed marriage. Bella needs to concede that given the circumstances, and if the shoe was on the other foot, she would have been offended, hurt and angry if Edward danced with a woman (even if she was a lesbian) in the same manner.
sarah martin chapter 23 . 1/11
Seriously -_- she's mad at him ?! What the hell is wrong with her! She's in a relationship with him he should be jealous and she should be careful of how to react with mens around her even in they are gay , what would she do if she saw him with a lesbian and they were dancing like she was with paul! i agree he shouldn't have hit him but a screaming match should be his first reaction to a situation like this! It's out of his hand!. He should be the one upset with her ,,, i can't wait for the next chapter i love your story a bunch pardon my rant lol
cctwilight chapter 23 . 1/11
I hope she doesn't stay mad at him.
LaPumuckl chapter 23 . 1/11
Damn, he really fucked up there:(
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