|Reviews for Forgive Me, Father, for I Will Sin|
| Helen chapter 13 . 7/29/2013
I love this! Please update soon!
| Bonesy Babe chapter 13 . 7/29/2013
I'll beg if I have to...honest. I HAVE to know who is standing at the door. Ugh! Cliffies!
| twiclare chapter 13 . 7/31/2013
I'm guessing either Alice or Jasper is at the door, or could be Sue, or Tanya! I guess I'll just have to wait and see! Edward knows and understands why Charlie has reacted so badly, it's hard to see their relationship ever being comfortable again. I wonder if Charlie will admit to himself the hypocrisy of his own views; he was all for Edward moving on with a younger woman, just not his daughter!
| notsurewhattoput chapter 13 . 7/31/2013
love love love!
| Rpatz-Wifey chapter 13 . 7/31/2013
OH MY GOD, NOOOOOO! I LOVE YOU, BUT I HATE THIS! And, I think I'm gonna call it and say it's Tanya at her door! (As ridiculous as it sounds, I wouldn't put it past her to follow them. lol) I'm probably wrong, but usually I'm pretty good with guessing how a cliffie will go. Anyway, do you think I could get that teaser? :) I don't think I'd like anything more. ;] Other than the next chapter, obviously. haha. Speaking of, do you know when it will be posted?
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/29/2013
Wow! I started reading this story yesterday and I'm in love! I really hope Charlie will come around soon and won't do anything stupid.
| dollydimple chapter 13 . 7/31/2013
I think maybe Sue why would Tanya have Bella's address or maybe Charlie contacted Jasper, Charlie has to be in a state. Update soon please.
| SherieHearts chapter 13 . 7/31/2013
Oh no. This is why secrets suck. I think it's Sue. Or Tanya. I don't really know. I'm always on the edge of my seat reading this story. In a good way. Can't wait for more.
| MaryMary123 chapter 13 . 7/31/2013
oh girl you need to stop that. I might just have a heart attack. This could be Sue.
| MaryMary123 chapter 12 . 7/31/2013
well he just has to get used to the idea. Hopefully he does not get hurt in the storm. Parents are like that about their children they forget they grow up and with that make their own way. We just have to love them no matter what. Just like our heavenly father loves us.
| MaryMary123 chapter 11 . 7/31/2013
of course Tanya would come. Hard to let go of the money.
| Love M Go Blue chapter 13 . 7/31/2013
Well, it certainly sounds like it isn't Charlie at the door, given the way Edward worded his thoughts.
I doubt it would be Tanya - how would she know (1) that it was Bella who was at the ball with Edward, or (2) where Bella lives even if she did know it was her? And even if she did know those things, given her attitude & behavior at the ball, it doesn't seem like she would have waited as long as she has to knock.
And I can't really remember who else has already been mentioned in this story - not that it even has to be someone we've already heard anything about. But they're at Bella's place, so it would be someone from Bella's life, not Edward's.
| MaryMary123 chapter 9 . 7/31/2013
I keep feeling that we will get into the next chapter and all hell will break loose. Tanya and her antics. Charlie is so suspicious. Best thing is to say Dad he is older and I have been waiting to talk until I know where this is going. I don't want you to be upset but please respect the fact I am grown and no longer a teenager.
| MaryMary123 chapter 8 . 7/31/2013
Jasper was perfect..
| MaryMary123 chapter 6 . 7/31/2013
oh my gosh... I might cry.. you scared me Charlie.