|Reviews for Forgive Me, Father, for I Will Sin|
| MinaRivera chapter 6 . 3/26/2013
OH MY GAWD! MEAN CLIFFIE! I think is Jasper... or Alice.
Can't wait to read what happens next!
| Moltz chapter 6 . 3/26/2013
So much for keeping a lid on their relationship!
The thoughts on who caught them oscillate between Sue and Jasper. I'm leaning towards Mizzdee's review logic of Jasper. But you have so many options. Can't wait to read your choice as to who caught them.
| HoosierNina chapter 2 . 3/26/2013
I can't see Charlie liking this at all!
| HoosierNina chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Hmm this seems like a fun story idea.
| Montara chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
I think Charlie will be very mad at them but..he was the one suggesting that Edward should find someone young...so they have a way to keep Charlie quiet :D
| Kim Ginsberg chapter 6 . 3/26/2013
OH FUCK! I bet its Jasper or Alice
| Mizzdee chapter 6 . 3/26/2013
You evil, evil woman. I can't believe you stopped there.
This was so good. I thought they were going to give themselves away way before this, especially with Alice in the room. Glad they were able to keep to their rules...kinda. LOL
Now, for who caught them...well, it's obviously not Charlie or he would have punched Edward before he could form a coherent sentence. And it's not Alice cuz her freak out, good or bad, would have been heard for miles. I don't think it's Sue cuz I don't think she'd come at them like that. So, in my mind, that only leaves on person...Jasper. I could tell by the way he was eyeing Bella that he suspects something and he's probably the only one out of any of them that could be trusted with this secret. And he'll make sure they tell Charlie sooner rather than later cuz he won't want to lie to Alice any longer than he has to.
So, now that you have my guess, you have to hurry up and write and post the next chapter so I can know if I'm right. And so I can see how they get out of this mess. Love the story, darlin. Can't wait for more. Much love - D
| debslmac chapter 6 . 3/26/2013
:) loved this
| Kagblueeyes25 chapter 6 . 3/26/2013
Hmmm, I'm guessing jasper. If not him Sue. And she will find it hard to keep quiet.
| Melany333 chapter 6 . 3/26/2013
LOVE IT, CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE
| manda2784 chapter 6 . 3/26/2013
Uh oh, busted! I'm dying to know who caught them! I'm going to guess Alice or Jasper. I think Jasper suspects something. I'm thinking it's definitely not Charlie. I think Charlie would rip Edward off his daughter and ask questions later.
Can't wait to read more!
| Kim Ginsberg chapter 5 . 3/26/2013
love it! BTW I loveeeee flagfic to turn fic into ebooks! My kindle had over 700 fic books! LOL
| 2brown-eyes chapter 6 . 3/26/2013
I think it is Jasper or Jacob, I don't think it is Charlie.
| galaxy69uk chapter 6 . 3/26/2013
Oh I hope it's Alice, I had the daughter comment all the time lol I used to find it funny! In one day I was daughter, sister to his children, and mother lol
| flower123 chapter 6 . 3/26/2013
Oh shit! Oh god why! They are so busted update soon please