|Reviews for On a Limb|
| maphie chapter 4 . 1/4
Maybe not each other's firsts but maybe each other's last.
| maphie chapter 2 . 1/4
| twilight.jenn chapter 4 . 12/6/2013
| imustbecrazy chapter 4 . 8/18/2013
i really liked this - any chance of continuing it on even further? a futuretake, perhaps? pretty please :)
| SparrowNotes24 chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
I'm making my way round lots of o/s and small fics as Im terrible at keeping up with WIPs. The summary of this one caught my eye. You have such a lovely way with words that draws the reader into the story so I almost felt I was sat in the tree with them. You included subtle hints throughout that their relationship will be tempestuous "it was then I knew he was a liar" ... So I'm already a little on edge.
I really felt for her at the end. I remember the exact same thing happening to me at school!
| A little Blur-ry chapter 4 . 8/3/2013
Loved it, thanks so much for sharing it!
| archy12 chapter 4 . 7/30/2013
Such a beautiful chapter-from Bella's being with Riley and yet not being with him to Edward expressing himself on the Ferris wheel and then their lovemaking-it made me cry. How our mind dictates everything,makes us feel same things to be different! To Bella, Riley's kisses were rough and his tongue was too sharp,and when he held her hand at the fair it made her hand the second last sentence? Amazing!
| archy12 chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
Even though my teenage was nothing like this,this makes me because some things are always the same,wherever in the world you live.
Rosalie waved to her?That's a huge improvement.
| archy12 chapter 2 . 7/30/2013
Wow,I really don't know what to say except to repeat myself-incredible! You know how to make your readers feel for the characters,and sometimes even like the characters.
| archy12 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
God,you are incredible.I can't believe I have had you on the favourite author's list for ages and not read this story yet. This is just so real-the conversations,Bella's thoughts and her reactions...It's not a sad story,but reading it makes me sad for some reason,if it makes sense. Anyway,on to the next chaper!
| Shaym chapter 4 . 7/17/2013
| Cakebakers1 chapter 4 . 6/29/2013
This was great ! I can't wait to read more of your stories!
| monicaalexr chapter 4 . 6/12/2013
loved it xD
but I cried a lot too xp
| asam75 chapter 4 . 6/3/2013
It's amazing how much life you breathed into 20000 words. I know the characters, I saw them develop and change while you took them to a believable and hopeful ending. You could give lessons to the authors with their 75 chapters plus of the mundane or meaningless angst and drama and sex (yeah, it can get meaningless when it occurs 2-3 times per chapter). Maybe I should take my on advice and pare down my words, because I think I said it all in the first sentence. Oh, and this one, thank you.
| alchemilla chapter 4 . 5/31/2013
LOVELY. Loved it. Came here from ADF 'Pimp your Stuff'.