Reviews for The Master of Shadows
desdelor97 chapter 5 . 3/9
This was a great chapter,
Please keep up the great work.
Furionknight chapter 5 . 10/21/2015
I look forward to more :)
DeadParade chapter 5 . 8/26/2015
This is a really cool fic, I hope it continues
Beer is food chapter 5 . 6/30/2015
Dunno if i should bother trying to write a review, as the fic seems abandoned
I usually don't like time-travel fics, because they often suffer from "Mary-Sue" infestation.
However, the way you go at it, makes it believeable.
I kinda don't like the more or less narrative way, you write this. It seems to just gloss over the fic so far. I would have liked more details and character interactions.
Well you wrote only five chapters, so it could be just the way you wanted to go over the "introduction" until you get to the start of the canon storyline.
Anyway, it's sad that you abandoned it.
Darkjaden chapter 5 . 5/30/2015
Does naruto/shikamaru know any elemental jutsus?
SaucyHandles chapter 5 . 4/7/2015
Really sucks to see that this hasn't been updated in almost three years...
TheSpaceDreamer chapter 5 . 3/30/2015
Please write more to this story. Love the concept.
reviewer chapter 5 . 3/14/2015
lovley chapter
lambtastic chapter 5 . 2/22/2015
This will be so weird if Mito and Shikamaru get together. Haha. Please continue soon!
Moikan Yoloko chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
This is... Troublesome.
Taboo22 chapter 5 . 12/15/2014
Great story!
BrotherDeath chapter 5 . 12/13/2014
I really like this story. It's well written and has an interesting felling in it. Can only hope you will continue it. So far GOOD JOB!
Guest chapter 5 . 9/23/2014
supert history
Guest chapter 3 . 9/15/2014
Motivation doesn't make you stronger, it's motivation. ROOT doesn't need it because they follow orders without hesitation or lack of effort. They don't need a normal person's drive because they have don't get demotivated or stop trying.
brnmac560 chapter 5 . 5/24/2014
Love this story. Wish you had continued it. "A healthy psychic" I think you spelled wrong and meant "psyche".
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