|Reviews for The Master of Shadows|
| Beer is food chapter 5 . 6/30
Dunno if i should bother trying to write a review, as the fic seems abandoned
I usually don't like time-travel fics, because they often suffer from "Mary-Sue" infestation.
However, the way you go at it, makes it believeable.
I kinda don't like the more or less narrative way, you write this. It seems to just gloss over the fic so far. I would have liked more details and character interactions.
Well you wrote only five chapters, so it could be just the way you wanted to go over the "introduction" until you get to the start of the canon storyline.
Anyway, it's sad that you abandoned it.
| Darkjaden chapter 5 . 5/30
Does naruto/shikamaru know any elemental jutsus?
| SaucyHandles chapter 5 . 4/7
Really sucks to see that this hasn't been updated in almost three years...
| TheSpaceDreamer chapter 5 . 3/30
Please write more to this story. Love the concept.
| reviewer chapter 5 . 3/14
| lambtastic chapter 5 . 2/22
This will be so weird if Mito and Shikamaru get together. Haha. Please continue soon!
| Moikan Yoloko chapter 1 . 1/12
This is... Troublesome.
| Taboo22 chapter 5 . 12/15/2014
| BrotherDeath chapter 5 . 12/13/2014
I really like this story. It's well written and has an interesting felling in it. Can only hope you will continue it. So far GOOD JOB!
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/23/2014
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/15/2014
Motivation doesn't make you stronger, it's motivation. ROOT doesn't need it because they follow orders without hesitation or lack of effort. They don't need a normal person's drive because they have don't get demotivated or stop trying.
| brnmac560 chapter 5 . 5/24/2014
Love this story. Wish you had continued it. "A healthy psychic" I think you spelled wrong and meant "psyche".
| saashi samy chapter 5 . 4/2/2014
i really like
| saashi samy chapter 4 . 4/2/2014
| I eat SheperdPie chapter 5 . 2/11/2014
Nuu why you no update for a year? This story I like...