Reviews for Tales of Uzumaki Naruto
TheCrazyTwins chapter 11 . 3/17
Best typo everbut you know what would happen if some thongs got out in the open." I am laughing so hard right now. Great story by the way.
TheCrazyTwins chapter 11 . 3/17
Best typo everbut you know what would happen if some thongs got out in the open." I am laughing so hard right now. Great story by the way.
Azaira chapter 3 . 1/18
Not bad so far, but could use a little work in grammar.

And claws? instead of chains? It might seem cool, but they are so much weaker... the chains are versatile, powerful, and can extend a large distance, capable of capture or destruction within range.

Claws... can be used to climb. So can chains, but shinobi can do that anyways. Claws can scratch and pierce. So can chains. Claws... look cool? Chains can just do so much more. This is more of a disappointment.

I'd be fine if Naruto could change its appearance with practice, though they usually do so in the form of chains. But you limited that to a single form. Naruto could buy claw gauntlets to do basically the same thing and make them indestructible with seals. Unlimited chains capable of restraining a biju? Versus claws? Yea...
Guest chapter 3 . 1/9
Fuck off with the log bullshit
Danterevan chapter 28 . 11/27/2016
that little song sounds more like it would fit with joker and/or Harley Quinn
marquis.shax chapter 2 . 11/2/2016
ok that's seriously the stupidest shit I've ever read. Naruto's mother is supposedly training him AND he's befriended Kurama yet his control is STILL 100% shit as in he probably can't do tree or water walking and had to get the scroll to get the shadow clone. What the fuck "training" has he been doing masturbation training?
arinasution5 chapter 13 . 7/6/2016
Monster King chapter 58 . 7/4/2016
Great story liked the plot and the pairing between fu and Naruto was good as well liked how you had kushina also sealed inside Naruto along with kyubi and raising him from inside his mind. Liked how you kept bashing limited to Sasuke and fangirl mode Sakura liked how fu moved into konoha giving her a better life than she had before than and assisting in her romance with Naruto. Good story all in all
brutusjr chapter 15 . 3/23/2015
Karin? I always thought her character was sort of lame?! Please go with Fuu.
alksdfj chapter 15 . 1/6/2015
there should not be a karin/naruto inless people want it to be incest since i think both of them are uzumakis. or mabie if they are really really REALLY distantly related.
Derek chapter 39 . 10/22/2014
GEEZ, that was anti-climactic... you spend 38 chapters beefing Naruto up with all of that specialized training for what appears to be at least 3-4 years for a Chunin exams appearance only to let him get rick-rolled out of the tourneyh in the 1st round of the Finals & tie-eliminated by Fuu (who is supposed to be younger & far less experienced with only FOUR months of formal freakin training none-the-less, compared to all of Naruto's training)... just cause you wanted to fan-service a ridiculous NaruFuu love affair?

If I was Naruto, once she comes sauntering up to him in her sexy poses after the Chunin exams are over, I'd be like, BUG OFF, Fuu, you cost me my moment of glory in the Chunnin exams that I worked my whole life towards & you only spent 4 months working at. She can get angry all she wants, but I wouldn't some some chick smurfetting all over me if that had happened to me. Goals, man... Goals... Naruto has 'em. That love BS can come later.

Now Naruto's eliminated when he shoulda gone way deeper. Super-lame & anti-climactic.

I've been enjoying all of the other stuff so far, though... very much so.
pikachucat chapter 58 . 9/23/2014
gundamexia34 chapter 8 . 8/17/2014
agree w/ ur rant here pal
whitestriker1219 chapter 29 . 5/28/2014
You do know that Tobi is just Obito without the first 'O' and has the last two letters moved to the front?
Guest chapter 4 . 4/15/2014
What is "the log"?
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