Reviews for Not a Little Girl
Bertha chapter 7 . 6/14
I don't like these 2. Wait, I mean, I don't like Bella. They are in 2 totally different places. She's way too immature for him. The way she reacted was way a 19 year old would react. And why the hell would she want to take him to a frat party? Even if he agreed to go... They need to part ways.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/10
Yuck...I really hate it when Edward is a whore but I cannot stand it when Bella is a big, huge skank and she is one in this. She's gross.
starsmina chapter 12 . 1/26
EVK70 chapter 12 . 1/9
Thank you :)
KB-94 chapter 12 . 11/27/2016
Pretty sure I've read this before but it's been so long that it was like reading it for the first time. It's such a seeet story and reminds me so much of my relationship with my now husband. We had a long distance relationship for 2 years before we got married. The pain of being apart was unbearable sometimes and the intensity that followed when we were united flowed into our marriage. It's an incredible feeling and the bond we have is so much deeper because of the way we started out, which is exactly what I see in your version of Bella and Edward.

Well done and thank you for taking the time to write and finish this story!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/24/2016
I love you, Charlie. best dad ever.
divyvicki chapter 12 . 6/1/2016
Great story! I enjoyed reading it.
divyvicki chapter 10 . 6/1/2016
I think she was disappointed it wasn't an engagement ring!
divyvicki chapter 8 . 5/22/2016
Glad that's out in the open.
divyvicki chapter 7 . 5/22/2016
I thought that was going to be Jacob, not Riley.
divyvicki chapter 6 . 5/22/2016
Somehow I think Billy is going to cause problems for both Edward and Charlie.
divyvicki chapter 5 . 5/16/2016
Love the way they handled the Garrett situation.
divyvicki chapter 3 . 5/11/2016
Lovin this
divyvicki chapter 2 . 5/5/2016
Great chapter.
divyvicki chapter 1 . 5/1/2016
This was a Twifanfic recommendation. Loved the end of the first chapter.
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