What a beautiful happy ending.

Interesting story.

Yay thank you for sharing great story!

That was great!

Yayy everyone coming together

Oh snap!

Yep as shocked as Natsu great chapter

What a jerk

I loved the concept of the story. Though it got a little lost at the end it was still great. I have just 2 minor things that kinda bugged me about your story. The first is that the story seemed very fast paced, there were some parts that were rushed and caused me to get confused like how fast Natsu and Lucy got together and joined Fairytail. The other is how Lucy reacted when she found out that her spirits lied to her. It seemed unnatural how mad she got, and not at all like her. I understand that this was a fan fiction and that characters maybe a bit OOC but it was just too out of character for me. please remember that I mean no disrespect from this this is just how I feel about your story. Keep up the good work.

Amazing story, but (my opinion) I personally don't like how Lucy got mad at her spirits like that. I think it would've been more her if she had understood. otherwise I absolutely loved this story.

great story.

Wow! I love this dude! ** cute pairings, not being too into the story, and my fav was the epilogueeeeee! _

Awesome ending! I think you should make a story about the new generation of fairy tail!

omfg! laxus is lucys brother! awesomeness by defalt!

That was sweet