Reviews for If You Ever Hunger
malleelee chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
The temptations of growing into the love of a father sexually happens only in special circumstances. This was special. Very Special.
Evelyne-raconte chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
She knows what she wants, this Bella, and she takes it (or him). It was very hot.
But now, they are 3 broken hearts.
Thank you for sharing.

And for "guest" : there is a warning at the beginning, you don't have to read if you don't like it, unless you are a repressed judgemental pervert. LOL
Hoodfabulous chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
Oh, my God. I need a drink. That was so hot and naughty. Loved it. o.O
karin88 chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
UNF..this was seriously why do I need a cold shower now?! I would love it if you wrote more, maybe even only one more chapter?! Pretty please :'(
Begging aside, I truly enjoyed it, so thank you! xo
trixietraci chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
UNF! olderwatd is my favorite & this is so wrong but so damn right. We need another chapter, though. Pretty please with cherries (heh) on top?
Nicffwhisperer chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
HOLY SHEET. That. Was. Hot.
Nrbl1 chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
Wow! Would love a little more :)
Seagull83 chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
Fucking hell dude that was so bloody wrong. But I'm ashamed to admit I liked it. I'm going to hell.
Annie Butts chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
That was so wrong.
And dirty.
And why isn't there another Chapter?!
Gimme more or I will send cute cuddly baby pictures.

Okay that sounds wrong considering what this story is about.

Please Ebil one? Can I know what happens next?
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Oh, my! This wasn't CONTINUED? *sigh*
Very, VERY smexy!
bellawu chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
I hope you will continue this. Pleaseeeeee...
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
She is a sick sick girl. I hope her mom throws her ass out and disowns her.
Colleen Alize chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
ok you NEED to turn this into a full length fic for me! lol i'm dying over here wondering wth is going to happen gahhhhh! sigh good work though :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Pinkster Lily chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Hot damn. That was intense.

Totally didn't expect where this story was going, but I really liked it :)

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