|Reviews for If You Ever Hunger|
| la-geologia chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
LOL! I was wondering how some of the contest authors would feel once their stories weren't anonymous anymore. So many of the entries were just so gloriously kinky and wrong.. ;-)
I really really enjoyed reading this one though! It was great, and it was definitely one of the ones I voted for. Thanks so much for sharing, hon. xoxo
| mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
I loved it she almost seems.a little dark at the end but so good thanks
| Teresa R chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Busted but it was so good lol
| texasangel75 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
was this a 1 shot or full story? :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
| Nadia Amadeo chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
That was amazing !
Can we have a sequel, please ?
| insanemum chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Wow - that was all kind of filthy - and great. Nice job :)
| Mom23xx chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
So naughty...love it.
| blueeyes11354 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
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| MissTeenageDream chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
I really love this story! (I even voted for it in the contest)
Please say that you're going to continue!
| twlighttina chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
| Angeldolphin01 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
I love it.
| AnakinPadmeSkywalker chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
That was...interesting. I love your writing style, or course, but the subject matter was undeniably dark and morbid.
Bella's a real bitch in this one, isn't she? I guess her behavior and thought processes are going to throw a real monkey wrench in her relationship with her mother, if she even cared in the first place.
| MlleAngieB chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Yeap, its wrong. But its not incest, he is not her real dad, this is far away... This is my line of too wrong.
And she has this feeling since ever for him, she not consider him her father.
Other thing, I love the way you write your stories. You have this talent of tell a good one. I read a lot of fanfics, and a lot of fanfics with older Edward, and I like how you finished it. These kinds of relations are forbiden, are taboo for a reason. Its hot, its adrenaline, but he is her mothers husband... And its crazy catch your companion for more than a decade fucking your daughter in your bed, in your home.
Yeap, its crazy. And thanks for put the complex thing on all this. Not be just easy, and fantasy.
Again, I love your stories.