Reviews for If You Ever Hunger
RoryCullen chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
OMG! I am surprised he was swayed so easily and that he liked being her D and most of all that he was so rough with her... her first time. I wonder why Bella did this to her mother? Poor Renee.
Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Damn, I should have reviewed here instead of on the contest profile. Make sure you go read my review over there :-P
mirrorlight31 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
I would really love to know what happens! Great story!
KGreenDreamer chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Wow ... All kind of wrong but my god it's pure desire! If there is a sequel or if you ever thing to turn it in a full story, I'm curious to see where this can goes. Thanks for sharing this forbiden thought with us though.
Lulu M chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
What a way to leave us hanging! So wrong but so good and I loved it!
HollettLA chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Any plans to continue? You know I loved this!

Resesmee chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
can't believe it ended there, noooooo need more lol want to know what happens next :)

loved it thou great naughty story.
1853kaz chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Oo wow, definitely not a gentle tale. But well executed, a great read, thank you! :)
BrookeBelikov chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Great one shot! :D
la-geologia chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
LOL! I was wondering how some of the contest authors would feel once their stories weren't anonymous anymore. So many of the entries were just so gloriously kinky and wrong.. ;-)

I really really enjoyed reading this one though! It was great, and it was definitely one of the ones I voted for. Thanks so much for sharing, hon. xoxo
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
I loved it she almost seems.a little dark at the end but so good thanks
Teresa R chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Busted but it was so good lol
texasangel75 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
was this a 1 shot or full story? :)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Good stuff!
Nadia Amadeo chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
That was amazing !
Can we have a sequel, please ?
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