Reviews for Dark Phoenix of Konoha
Mika the Supreme Ninja chapter 5 . 7/23
Sasuke's entire family was murdered by his brother and he was mentally tortured with those memories for 3 days by said brother... he is right to be full of hate!
Guest chapter 16 . 7/18
Naruto became aizen lol
RFDN chapter 33 . 7/15
This is honestly an ok story.

All of that said it still has issues. the most notable are the grammatical errors that likely occur due to the likelihood of the author's primary language not being English. Recap of earlier shown events happens significantly more often than needed to the point of feeling like padding in many later chapters.

One of the major recurring items are characters pointing out Naruto is stronger than a Genin... which is pointless in most contexts.
Ahmad Hazwan chapter 1 . 6/29
update please
890230310 chapter 47 . 6/16
It's been a while, but do think you could update? I really like this story.
Li-Ion78 chapter 14 . 6/5
needed more dramatic flare to this somewhat bitter meeting because jiraiya's confession that naruto reminds him of minato and still be hurt would actually be hurtful to say to someone who was alone like naruto's upbringing. naruto may be happy to be comapred to his father, but his lack of attention and affection means that he could have taken it wrong
Li-Ion78 chapter 12 . 6/4
need more emotion to this, author. it sounds like theyre always transacting and kakashi is dry as a rock
Defiant7 chapter 2 . 5/10
this chapters is cringy. let me reveal everything I kept secret for so long
Crazypersonreading2 chapter 47 . 4/14
This is a cool story.
Crazypersonreading2 chapter 20 . 4/13
I love how Sasuke keeps saying he’ll catch up to Naruto. Dude... good luck
Guest chapter 3 . 3/29
God, please tell me they don't call him "Dark Phoenix", the whole fucking story, that's just cringe as hell
my 2 guys chapter 47 . 3/26
that was great keep the chapters coming
Guest chapter 21 . 3/21
I know sasuke doesn’t know this about kakashi. Kakashi was treated like a son by kushina and minato so the likely chance is kakashi sees naruto as an otouto who he wishes to protect when naruto was younger and nurture to whatever degree he could legally get away with. Now older naruto kakashi will want to shield naruto as much as possible by training naruto and keeping his identity from the public as possible.
Guest chapter 16 . 3/21
Honestly I always saw it like naruto is adopted kakashi for the obvious reasons like naruto is kakashi’s adopted otouto and kakashi was S ranked shinbi, etc. Uchiha sasuke can be adopted Umino iruka. Iruka at least had a years of teaching sasuke before the Uchiha Massacre and doesn’t treat sasuke like he is anything special. Sasuke would least trust iruka after having him for a chunin sensei for a year before the Uchiha Massacre. The two background is very similar. Iruka would have empathy for sasuke in way others would not. Because iruka has never been rejected like naruto( kyuubi gaki) and kakashi(kakashi’s otousan, friend killer kakashi, cold blooded kakashi, etc) would have people who would help iruka and sasuke if anything happened like kidnapping. Very few people would help kakashi and naruto except some high level ninja who are friends with kakashi, in the know(parents, naruto’s heritage, and naruto is a scroll), and don’t even care about kurama.
Guest chapter 10 . 3/21
The reason hinata has such problems is hinata doesn’t want to be ninja. If left alone, hinata would be a chef. Hinata also carry the guilt of Neji’s Otousan’s death on her shoulders. Even though most likely she was one year and some months old when she was kidnapped by Kumo. If she was able to defend herself, her uncle wouldn’t have to die in her otousama’s place. And at the same time, she is traumatized by what happened which in hinata’s mind makes her not want to be a ninja. To hinata, ninjas causes pain, suffering, and death. Plus it is hyuuga clan tradition that every hyuuga becomes ninja. There are no exceptions to the rule. That is why hinata fights for himawari to let her walk her own path because hinata couldn’t fight for herself. Himawari is civilian.
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