can't wait for the next chapter

your a real prick

damm this fucker knows how to wright

dropped, too much exposition between all the nothing that keeps happening.

This is stupid. You keep harping on about the abuse he suffered while sprinkling in bits about the Hokage planning to manipulate Naruto into staying loyal to a village that hates him. If the Hokage can manipulate Naruto now, why couldn't he manipulate the village back then not to hate Naruto. He let the abuse happen and lied to Naruto constantly about the only 2 things Naruto wanted to know, who he rly is and why people hate him.
You are portraying the village as the bad guy and you are not portraying the Hokage as a very good person, so if after Naruto is strong enough to actually run away, you have him staying and forgiving the village all I can say is fuck you and that I will be dropping the story that very paragraph.

so much exposition. rly, naruto talks for 2 paragraphs, hokage asks one question, naruto talks for 3 paragraphs, hokage asks another question, naruto talks for 4 paragraphs...

Just reading it again and wanted to poke you…. So… uh…

*poke*

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Bit of a shame this looks to be abandoned. Really liked everything I read of this story so far.

Sorry but this fic is a cringy fest of epic proportions, I couldn't get past chapter 2.

Looking forward to the next Chapter.

FINALLY A MC THAT I LIKE AND IS RATIONAL THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH FOR THAT

here i am

an excellent story. would have loved to see it continue. op naruto but still in the line with logic. kudos for the write.

Cant wait for an update on this if you get the time and inspiration. It has all the things I had wanted in a fic

My Nigga (I’m black) please bring this back