Reviews for Dark Phoenix of Konoha
cyiusblack chapter 47 . 10/10
update soon
fancyspinner chapter 47 . 10/9
First, I’m really sorry about the loss of your father. That’s a horrible thing to have to go to. I hope your move went well. I really appreciate this story. I know how life can get in the way of everything fun so I’ll just hopefully wait for you to have A chance update. Take care.
fancyspinner chapter 44 . 10/9
Your story so much better than actual show. :-) I just wish Naruto would make friends with someone. Everyone needs someone too trust.
fancyspinner chapter 21 . 10/9
Really loved the character development here! I hope, just once, itachi get a happy ending. He deserves it.
fancyspinner chapter 16 . 10/9
OK, this is a great way to use Denzo. Lots of fun! I really look forward to see what happens from here on out.
Guest chapter 24 . 10/2
YAS! Secret is out! I bet the civilians will change their opinions. Like the snakes they are! In fact, the civilians might as well join Orochimaru, seeing as both are snakes
Guest chapter 21 . 10/2
phew. finally. I'm glad Sasuke came around. I don't care about Sakura though. You can continue bashing her. She really is useless
Shadow of Future chapter 18 . 9/23
Just a ramdom thought:
Imagine if you were a jonin level ninja and you were watching a video and you could see every single frame. That would kind of suck.
FlowersBite chapter 3 . 9/19
Wow, Naruto is extremely good and he is only 12 so I can only imagine what a dynamic powerhouse he will be once he is more grown!
tooBLeez chapter 1 . 9/19
kyk ngerti kenapa
clover cat Klee chapter 46 . 9/10
Hey, I've just been rereading the story, and I noticed some small inconstistencies: in the beginning, you state that Naruto has observed specifically Kakashi's true genin exam and therefore knows what he is looking for - yet he has to work though the meaning when it's his turn? I get not telling his teammates how he knows the truth, but it sounded like he didn't know. Similarly with being told how oldKakshi was when he made Jonin - it was said in some earlier chapter that Naruto respected Kakashi for having been that good that young, but then the team gets told and he is impressed as if that was new information?
You also had Shino take up a weapon in chapter 22(progress, and yes I went back and looked where it was .), only to then reverse that during the chunun exam and have him work at combining his Kikaichu with the earth jutsu - was that meant as in 'he decided against the weapon he was supposedly very talented with because it didn't combine well with his Kikaichu' or had you forgotten about the weapon? I think you had called it a chain-sickle?
It's small things, and might very well be more about wording than actually you forgetting some detail, and even if you'd forgotten, it's such small things that I totally get not remembering that(I'd probably not have noticed if I hadn't read the whole thing in a few hours) but I thought I'd tell you what I'd noticed. The story is great as whole and I enjoy reading it(as I said, I've reread it now)but these are things you probably would never notice yourself. So yeah, I just thought I'd give a propper sonstructive criticism thing;)
Naruffoku chapter 1 . 8/31
Minato is short
Naruffoku chapter 2 . 8/31
This is ridiculous, a clan definitely would burn the scrolls before disposing of the remains. You should make a more plausible way for him to find them
Naruffoku chapter 3 . 8/31
Asuma hates Hiruzen and would probably call him old man
stylo1 chapter 32 . 8/26
they knew about the invasion but somehow they still let them breach the walls, so much for the barrier seals and seals on the wall. how the fuck did they all enter konoha? even sound was close enough to the kage to trap him
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