Reviews for Dark Phoenix of Konoha |
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yochan123 chapter 1 . 6/17/2021 Ooh this is so great! I love naruto figuring out his legacy and the shameful way his village treated him! And indeed sasuke is pretty stupid and stunted his own growth and Sakura is an idiotic fangirl |
HyperA2019 chapter 3 . 6/11/2021 Looking forward to Chapter 48. |
TobiramaSenjuZi chapter 15 . 5/28/2021 I really hope Naruto starts loving the village more. I hate stories were Naruto is a villain. |
NPGamer11 chapter 7 . 5/23/2021 Sakura Haruno, daughter of Karen Haruno XD |
fictionfanx chapter 17 . 5/10/2021 top naruto fic so far read. really good. easily in top 5. |
samanthasherman78 chapter 47 . 5/2/2021 love the story |
hiddensparrow chapter 47 . 4/10/2021 The first 5 or 10 chapters are a bit difficult to get through because they have a tendency to info dumping instead of natural speech and the characters don't really have developed personalities or emotional range and reactions. There is a lot of telling the reader what's happening instead of showing them through action or story development. I do have to compliments you and say that your writings improves quite a bit after that. They still are a bit stilted but that makes sense in your more militaristic interpretation of Konaha. I really liked your interpretation and development of team 7. They didn't become friends and they didn't have to, yet they were still an effective team. A lot of stories seem to forget that there something in between best friends and enemies, good job on that. Sasuke wasn't irredeemable. He was addressed and well developed without being a main focus of then narrative which was refreshing. Originally your concept was enough for me to continue reading, regardless of the rather goofy codename, but in the end you're execution improved quite a bit which improved the overall experience. I enjoyed reading this and I work forward to reading more when you have the leisure to write. |
F4d1ng-Sh4d0w chapter 47 . 4/4/2021 Loved the story although im sad to see that it is probably abonded. Would love an Update. Hope yall are doing fine out there. (Sorry for spelling to lazy to check) :) |
That1RainyDay chapter 10 . 3/24/2021 They speak as if they’re talking to us and not talking to another ninja that should already know most of this info. It makes reading it kind of awkward. |
papercut335 chapter 47 . 3/16/2021 I really liked the work. However, it is obvious that there will be no continuation. Sorry((( |
emiya unlimited blade works chapter 47 . 3/12/2021 This is a great story! I would really love to see this story updated because it is awesome! |
Kingofsenju chapter 1 . 3/9/2021 Please update |
Bruh chapter 4 . 2/19/2021 Its getting kinda ass from chapter 3 like my guy you revealed too much about naruto |
Waterwave123 chapter 47 . 2/20/2021 I hope you will continue this story! I really like your Naruto being so badass! |
Guest chapter 37 . 2/9/2021 I get that it's humor... but why is Lee and Gai's genjutsu so awful? I mean, what is wrong with a sunset? XD Anyway, this too was a great chapter! Well done! |