This fanfic is awesome. Crushed that the author has not continued writing more chapters.
Hope he is alright .
And please continue this story.
Don't let it go to waste.

Please update this. This fanfic is sick

Is it just me or this fanfic is a lot like or started out a lot like Naruto One Man Team even just the first chapter is almost identical. pls dont tell me this is plaigiarized

Ok this story is amazing but a seagull!? It would been fine if it was like a giant turtle or penguin Galapagos style or even a whale. Maybe even a bird of slmost anything except pigeons and the worst bird of all seagulls.

Finally Hiruzen actually survives the invasion, while inside the barrier.

...Dark Phoenix? I... I just... look, that's a name that immediately brings Edgy McEdglord to mind.

I still fail to see the reason of two separate identities and I fail to see why naruto would CARE about the leaf! It really isn't about changing naruto... THE VILLAGE must change in order for it to matter/survive.

Honestly if all naruto is doing under some flimsy id is selling seals? Then.. "If you don't like them, don't buy them"... I really don't see the reason behind this at all... I mean with superheroes it's a way of life, it's a choice... They are gonna be living two separate lives FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES... For naruto it isn't really a point there... For supers it's "one life in the public, and one life private"... For naruto because he's the container, his private life is public... He never gets a break... So the entire reason for a "secret identity" breaks down. making "dark phoenix" means ABSOLUTELY NOTHING and is kinda STUPID.

yeah i like the story, i just dont like how naruto is spilling all his secrets to sarutobi. i imagine his character more cynical. i just dont understand why would he b like that. but other than that great story. thanks for writing.

why i Robert Krause had some thing to say on it now it is with sarkua she is sill a fan gril , if i Robert Krause was doing it she well be Naruto gril and 2 like Naruto she is dark phoenix of konoha as well the 2 one and she is living with him not with her mom and dad , in it the 2 be on road doing stuff like running the canvans and sold off stuff too, when the 2 living in the same home Naruto and his gril had living now and running a under the fools and made money and ninjas stuff , as for a ninjas team the 2 were not had to working with 7 but them own 2 men ninjas team , when get SS class jobs and some others stuff too,

I still fail to see the reason of two separate identities and I fail to see why naruto would CARE about the leaf! It really isn't about changing naruto... THE VILLAGE must change in order for it to matter/survive.

Honestly if all naruto is doing under some flimsy id is selling seals? Then.. "If you don't like them, don't buy them"... I really don't see the reason behind this at all... I mean with superheroes it's a way of life, it's a choice... They are gonna be living two separate lives FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES... For naruto it isn't really a point there... For supers it's "one life in the public, and one life private"... For naruto because he's the container, his private life is public... He never gets a break... So the entire reason for a "secret identity" breaks down. making "dark phoenix" means ABSOLUTELY NOTHING and is kinda STUPID.

Can someone count the number of fish Naruto slapped Danzo with in that encounter, i lost track. Great chapter.

Well, that was explosive but less so than it could have been. Jiraiya sneaked a pass and is working on gaining ground with mega bonus points.

Why is there like a while page of comments of someone just straight up complaining it’s ff, appreciate the story for ehat it is. Well done!

I was wondering why he hadn't thought of that. Hah. With the paper wall torn down, the Hokage will be able to see situations better and act accordingly. Great chapter.

What's up with the repeated use of Japanese titles ? If you want to use them , please try to keep them consistent. Flying thundergod doesn't sound as OP as Flying Raijin.