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Ok, everything Perfect Except the Summon. I mean WTF! Dragons! That would be epic, this Sea birds? Sorry but absolute TRASH! But great Story, except Naruto should have also Fire and Lighting Element. OP Naruto is the only Naruto.

Why these weak Elements?! Why not Lighting ?! Lighting and Wind would be epic! Or all Elements.

I really like how you managed to make Sasuke not a douchebag while keeping close to his character.

you need to use words other than "said" and "asked" but other than that loving the story so far

Will Tobi be Obito or Madara Uchiha?

Hello, so, I'm just going to confess that I don't really leave reviews all that often. That being said, I really love your fic! I've actually read it about 20 times. It's in my Top 5 Favourite Naruto Fics category.

I know this is probably a long shot, but I was wondering if you were going to update the fic? Either way I just wanted to thank you for writing such an amazing fic!

Can't wait to read more. What about Itachi vs Sasuke? Will it happen now that Sasuke lost his drive to just kill his brother? It's good to see everyone doing good and all but some drama would be refreshing.

Awesome chapter. I normally don't like politics in stories here it's a refreshing. Can't wait to read more.

Wtf happened? Why does it seem like a 7 year old took over the story? The amount of grammar errors is insane.

Gai nominated his team for the jonin exams.
Typo?

I can just imagine Naruto slowly pulling out some poisoned senbon while grinning evilly at Sakura and Ino

sakura's dad isn't dead tho

love the story i hope you continue the story

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This is an amazing story! I hope you haven’t abandoned it and update again soon