Reviews for Dark Phoenix of Konoha |
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CoconutGoSkrrt chapter 47 . 9/7/2022 This story avoids a lot of really annoying elements; Kakashi and the Sandaime actually do their jobs, Sasuke and Sakura aren’t annoying as hell, Naruto actually learns things and uses skills other than NCM/sage mode and rasengan variants even though he has them at his disposal. Tho safe mode at least you could add considering he had the toads. Either way this story is refreshing and creative, the last ten chapters all being filler was odd tho. I hope you come back to this. |
Guest chapter 47 . 9/1/2022 I have read this story many times; I find it entertaining. Intriguing concept and I like this Naruto. Your writing is creative and you have well aligned the plot changes from Canon which makes the story interesting. I get tired of reading same old ‘retarded Naruto ‘ themes who chases after Sasuke. Also, Kakashe is doing his job, Sakura is disciplined as well. If Naruto had been smart and well raised, I also doubt he would be friends with Sasuke and Sakura. But also, you did improve Sasuke skills and personality from canon. Great story, please continue. |
Guest chapter 47 . 8/20/2022 This is one of the most entertaining five i’ve come across, please continue. Great writing! |
amavgupta0 chapter 22 . 8/16/2022 Bro nobody can learn chakra scalpels in such small amount of time without shadow clone help it is a very advanced technique a only a high chunin lvl medic can use that technique if she learned it |
amavgupta0 chapter 22 . 8/16/2022 bro after he became genuine I’ve not seen him improve even 1 percent |
amavgupta0 chapter 21 . 8/16/2022 Bro in canon she was even more pathetic and also realized she was useless in the mission still she didn’t break out of her fangirl mentality bro technically she didn’t breakout of her mentality in the whole series |
amavgupta0 chapter 17 . 8/15/2022 Bro zabuza could easily get out here he just said that to make Kakashi afraid for them and distract him one swing of kukorobichou they would be destroyed like naruto destroyed it from his fist so why zabuza can’t with his sword or one of his b ranked or higher jutsus |
amavgupta0 chapter 17 . 8/15/2022 bro first thing how did Kushina and minato led konoha forces to uzushio Kushinagar came after the destruction of uzushio in konoha and she was 5 at the time minato was the same age bro you are so stupid I can’t believe it and even if they lead minato became after 3rd war for his war efforts not before so why will he lead the forces even before the 3rd war started minato was 14 or 16 that’s just plain stupid that changes so much of the timeline with minato and Kushinagar age difference |
amavgupta0 chapter 16 . 8/15/2022 Bro hus true name is either Senju or Uzumaki namikaze is just a civilian name not a clan you made them to be like you make every sir name a clan if konoha had that many clans they would have several a rank and s rank shinobi and would have dominated the elemental nations by now and so many clans would not have died out this is no flame but if you make the last name of every strong shinobi a clan name that’s very stupid and naruto can keep the namikaze but he not at all honouring his other lineages. |
amavgupta0 chapter 10 . 8/15/2022 bro if a guy have strong chakra you have to just overpower the chakra of the shadow user like when naruto did when he mastered Kurama chakra |
amavgupta0 chapter 8 . 8/15/2022 Naruto thought an ability wasn’t evil in itself its how you use it and naruto has Kurama and if he is shown a prodigy and knows how the nine tails must have been treated and is intelligent he should figure something out with him or try to befriend him because in some way naruto understands Kurama and using Kurama chakra is an ability he is given so why avoid it he just shouldn’t force the kyuubi to give him chakra and ask for permission like the folloish naruto who asked for rent like he is a prisoner with no choice and you are asking a prisoner to give the warder rent to letting him live a life of solitude and loneliness well that’s fucked up |
amavgupta0 chapter 7 . 8/15/2022 bro if naruto would just help sasuke he would just tell him to mind his own buisness and he would have figured it out and 2nd thing if Naruto hates him why is he helping without sasuke even asking for his help that doesn’t show any kind of resentment towards sasuke |
amavgupta0 chapter 7 . 8/15/2022 Bro if naruto became this strong then he was training even harshly with what Kakashi is having him do and also with shadow clones which puts a strain on your mind and body after doing it everyday for many hours and he said himself he trained from 6 morning till 9 in the night with shadow clones Kakashi’s training was not even comparable so he should be happy with the join sensei making effort but it is not enough for him if he wants to become strongest he needs to push himself and that training was not pushing himself with all the amount he does |
amavgupta0 chapter 6 . 8/15/2022 bro sakura have 0 stamina how was she able to complete the exercises no matter how you push someone if she doesn’t have the stamina to do those she will simply faint it will only build over time like on one side you’re saying she has very low stamina and on the other she was able to complete all the exercises |
amavgupta0 chapter 5 . 8/15/2022 Bro no flame but on one side you said civilians have no control over shinobi they were all shinobi and they can’t force a Jonin to pass a team even hiruzen can decline that he’s the fucking hokage most of the times he doesn’t realise it but in this case he would have |