Reviews for Dark Phoenix of Konoha
Not GUEST chapter 1 . 7/11/2020
Why is there like a while page of comments of someone just straight up complaining it’s ff, appreciate the story for ehat it is. Well done!
RT89 chapter 7 . 7/12/2020
I was wondering why he hadn't thought of that. Hah. With the paper wall torn down, the Hokage will be able to see situations better and act accordingly. Great chapter.
TheIdeator chapter 28 . 7/10/2020
What's up with the repeated use of Japanese titles ? If you want to use them , please try to keep them consistent. Flying thundergod doesn't sound as OP as Flying Raijin.
Guest chapter 29 . 7/1/2020
Also isn't this the CHUNNIN exams? Should naruto should be able to charge through these people like they don't EXIST.. He already beat SEVERAL jounnin and he's masted A-rank and S-rank jutsu.. these yo-yos shouldn't even SLOW HIM DOWN!
Guest chapter 29 . 7/1/2020
Actually the match I'd really like to see in the finals is Rock Lee Vs. Sasuke Uchiha... Let the village watch as their "golden boy" is PWNED by someone "that can't even use chakra"! (yeah right, because leaping 30 feet in the air is NORMAL) Watch the uchiha get stomped into the ground, by LAST year's "civilian-born, clanless", "dead last" I get the feeling MANY opinions would change regarding the uchiha. and it wouldn't be for the better(for him)...

I never understood it, in any stories I write the village is gonna be "open-eyed" to the uchiha at the get-go... They are gonna have those notions ripped right outta their heads... It's one of the reasons sasuke will NEVER survive very long in mine... He's a dead man the moment he took his first breath...
Guest chapter 27 . 7/1/2020
Even kishi (the guy that made canon) said in interviews that if he could do it over, the chunnin exams would be MUCH different... much more believable... He made a LOT of mistakes during them... Just because he wanted to get them out of the WAY... Many ff writers kinda see them as the "finishing line", but that's not what they are, they are just a NUISANCE... Why do you think all further ones were CANCELED "off panel"?
Guest chapter 27 . 7/1/2020
You notice a LITTLE problem with the line-up right? One which REALLY should be addressed considering this is supposed to be an ALL ALLIED nations... It's NINE konoha vs. 3 from suna and NOBODY ELSE. Doesn't this seem a TAD "bias" to you? It also REALLY seems stupid to still even HAVE the finals if everyone IN THEM are from the same town! (let alone nation), which also "just so happens to be the village hosting it"? Considering the exams are SUPPOSED to be about (according to the hokage's speech and all the trash they're trying to shovel) "friendship, cooperation, the equality of the villages".. Seems kinda POINTLESS if NOBODY ELSE is there, doesn't it? I get why kumo and iwa aren't (apparently a LOT of other authors DON'T), it's an "ALLIED VILLAGE tournament".. as in "only allies and NON-AGGRESSIVE villages can even show up"... You wouldn't invite "ENEMIES" into your home for heaven's sake! But still the fact that NOBODY else made it to the finals kinda defeats the purpose of even HAVING a "finals" doesn't it? Want to see one genin wail on another? Well that could be DONE ANYTIME OF THE WEEK! "buy popcorn and sit near a training ground"... It's POINTLESS to even have the exams now. (the point of them are to show off what village is stronger and what teams to ask for... AGAIN, kinda redundant if they're all from the SAME PLACE! And it would be essentially taking money away from THEMSELVES!) I never understood this in canon... Hasn't it kinda defeated it's own purpose? As in... "what's the point?"... In order for the exams to be FEASIBLE...2-4 OTHER teams (not konoha) would ALSO have to pass. maybe not "teams" but at least individuals... THEN it could be called a "festival" or whatever it is in the manga/anime... (the way it is.. It makes no sense, and it also doesn't make any sense how orochi OR an "army" possibly got in!)
Guest chapter 27 . 7/1/2020
"sasuke uchiha who promised to be among the most powerful uchiha"? HAHAHHAA.. That RETARD? GET REAL! That moron couldn't fight his way outta a paper bag! He's a FUCK UP! He'd be DEAD 10 times over without a LOT of plot armor... Ever see the movie "twins"?.. Same applies... Itachi got all the "good stuff", everything that was LEFT OVER gave birth to sasuke.
Guest chapter 18 . 7/1/2020
I agree, either naruto needs to say "TO HELL with the village"... OR the village needs to change DRASTICALLY, QUICKLY.
Guest chapter 15 . 6/30/2020
The uchihas aren't that patient nor that smart! Think "brain-dead toddlers, with impulse control that get praised when they don't eat their own feces or beat the family cat to death"! That pretty much sums up the clan! WORTHLESS, ALL OF THEM!, except as "bad-guys" that should have been "EXTERMINATED" generations ago.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/30/2020
So why on their exercise does naruto even NEED sasuke and sakura?... You said "a clone each with another five clones".. so just make 3 instead of two and sasuke is cut out... I fail to see how it can be "competitive" when naruto is essentially doing 6 times the work! That's not competition that's just him WRECKING whatever the uchiha does easily... This doesn't help him at all... As a matter of fact, all this team is doing is REALLY slowing him down! (unlike sasuke, who said as much in canon, this one truly IS, and it should be pissing him straight the f*** off!).. Again, if naruto is already better then JOUNIN(which you already shown he is) then all these things are a WASTE of his time and his potential! WTF? Just SKIP all the missions until the chunin exams! "He gets along with nobody, hates his 'team' with a passion, will run at the drop of a hat, and cannot STAND konoha"! Essentially that covers everything. You make the third out to have "opened his eyes" but exactly WHAT have you done to change ANYTHING? "better training"? Naruto already had ALL the training he's supposed to have gotten before he even got with kakashi.. I haven't seen ONE improvement. and IT"S NOT ENOUGH!
Guest chapter 8 . 6/30/2020
Sasuke is ALSO the only one from a clan that seemed like it needed BEAT DOWN ON A DAILY BASIS in order to be a "functional member of society"... Seriously, they WEREN'T worth the work! Why not just "erase" them and be done with it? The're BORN with mental defenciencies.. aka.. BORN BROKEN... Not a good combo with "superpowers". And most DEFINITELY not worth the "security risk". (well that and they WERE responsible for just about everything bad that EVER occurred in the elemental nations since the beginning of them!) A "mistake" can be forgiven, but 6-7 GENERATIONS of constant evil? At some point, you gotta say "lost cause" and cut your losses. Even Itachi turned "evil"...(as in, he was still trying to target naruto, which essentially brings on the apocalypse). Nothing they do "ends well".
Guest chapter 8 . 6/30/2020
Also with sakura's little rant mid-chapter? She's NOT DUMB, (even if her behavior toward naruto points otherwise... REMEMBER NOBODY KNOWS anything about him! Meaning she wouldn't have forgotten what was said! The ONLY DELUSIONAL one in all of their classes was sasuke! He is the ONLY one needed to be beat down AGAIN, AND AGAIN AND AGAIN!)
Guest chapter 8 . 6/30/2020
I just don't know how they can be that totally INEPT and authors somehow believe readers will swallow it if naruto runs and suddenly konoha is "omnipresent". They are "clueless sacks of shit".
Guest chapter 8 . 6/30/2020
To reiterate how "stupid" these so called "ninja" are... Orochimaru plans this BIG attack on the village... Not only does he show up in person (which SHOULD be foiling it all), he also then proceeds to actually TELL the target exactly WHEN he will attack... and then proceeds with the standard "bum rush the gate"... For a "genius"? I am not seeing it. Also even here.. "orochimaru vanishes and then suddenly a new village is founded that nobody knows anything about. in a country that had NO ninja... HMMM.. DUH!" (also where the f*ck is the "spy-master"? Wasn't it his ONLY job to keep tabs on threats to the village?) You'd think SOMEONE (root, the old toad..etc) would have NOTICED orochimaru had been meeting with the kazekage! (he had to be there in person to kill him after all).
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