Excellent explanation of Uchiha massacre.

So Hokage already found a way to utilize Naruto's codename. That's quick thinking.

The scene with senbon makes no sense. I can see Naruto knocking Sakura out after she attempts to punch him. But arguing about Uchiha is hardly a reason for attack.

Sarutobi's worst nightmare - super strong Naruto who hates the village.

I always like to read about self-reliant Naruto who has no illusions about the village and gets back at those who wronged him.

The year is 2022… and I am still diligently waiting

ok unfortunately do to weapon choice I am not going to read anymore I love unusual weapons however blunt weapons aren't meant for unarmored or lite armoured combat and I don't think Shinobi will be wearing heavy armor as that will slow them down and be loud

Please update this story!

Conceptually, I think this story is incredibly dumb. The Hokage would never allow sabotage to take place in the academy. Konoha is a police state. A military dictatorship. And the Hokage is the dictator. He takes advice from his committee, but ultimately, his decision are final. Why on God's green Earth would a council of civilians have so much influence over an autocracy when they are constantly surrounded by people with superpowers? It makes absolutely no sense.

Your technical writing skills are pretty solid, but the concept behind this story falls apart. It's been established that Naruto is a lazy ass bum and that's why he failed the academy twice. He hates studying and written exams and he cut class tons of time with Kiba, Shika, and Choji. The next time you feel like writing an edgy OC fic, write and edgy OC fic. Don't create and OC and start calling him Naruto.

I highly request the pairing should be ino and naruto not hinata

I think the pairing should be ino and. naruto

As far as fanfiction goes, this is reasonably well written. Grammatical mistakes are present, but not particularly abundant. With that said, though, I can't get behind this story conceptually. Why would a council of civilians have any say in what goes down in a fucking shinobi village? You do realize that Konoha is more or less a military dictatorship, right?

And your OC (I will not call him Naruto because he is NOT Naruto) is nowhere near as smart as you claim he is. His actions are inconsistent with the way you portray his intelligence. And beyond that, your OC is just plain unlikeable.

I generally hate OC stories, but this one was pretty decent, I guess. Just don't refer to your OC as Naruto. If you wanna write a Mary Sue OC story, then write a Mary Sue OC story. Don't try to impose those qualities onto our beloved protagonist.

I’ll do anything for this to get updated

Lots of grammar mistakes but good first chap

And now Kakashi's jinxed the mission, you'd think he'd know better. Very interesting, good work