|Reviews for Pokemon: Unova Capers!|
| JohtoBlue chapter 39 . 1/29/2013
Clay was a jackass. I loved that side of him.
| JohtoBlue chapter 38 . 1/28/2013
I think that May's and Max's should be there when they are featured in the chapter.
I usually only read the Pokemon's levels when they're at the beginning of the chapter.
Good battles. I liked the one with Alder. I don't know how I feel about Nick vs. Cheren. I think it should have been in a different setting, then I'd probably like it better.
| JohtoBlue chapter 37 . 1/28/2013
Q1) Yes. Love them.
Q4) I think he'll win it.
Q5) No clue.
I'm going to be honest, May has been getting the crap beat out of her. I think she needs to win something to bring up her spirits and her character. I don't like how much she's getting destroyed.
| JohtoBlue chapter 36 . 1/28/2013
-Thita!" Gothita squealed as she sent out a crackling beam of blue ice, which froze the two Bug-Types cold. May started to run over to the two jet skis (the sack of pokeballs placed on the back) but was stopped when a sudden roar arose.-
My only advice is instead of parenthesis, use dashes, or one dash. - or -
-Thita!" Gothita squealed as she sent out a crackling beam of blue ice, which froze the two Bug-Types cold. May started to run over to the two jet skis-the sack of pokeballs placed on the back-but was stopped when a sudden roar arose.-
In this chapter, there was a lot of parenthesis.
| Anthony627AA chapter 55 . 1/28/2013
Please continue the story. This is good. When do you think Nick will finally beat Cheren? I think it's unfair how he treats Nick in the story.
| JohtoBlue chapter 35 . 1/28/2013
Aw... May lost again.
| JohtoBlue chapter 34 . 1/28/2013
Nice beginning. Not sure if I want Nick in the finals.
| JohtoBlue chapter 33 . 1/28/2013
Rival battle was good.
Don't know if I like Melvin yet.
| JohtoBlue chapter 32 . 1/28/2013
Good battle. Sucks that Nick lost but it is good for his character.
I want to see moreMax.
| nub guru chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Wow. I am really enjoying your story. Its very engrossing, the only thing is I wish there was alittle more detail in your episodes, and less filler chapters. Other than that its been one heck of a story so far and please, please keep it up. Also could you possibly not limit how many moves the pokes can learn? In the anime some learn like 10 moves, I feel battles seem to be a lot more interesting with variety :) anyways thanks for the awesome story
| captaincold chapter 55 . 1/25/2013
Great chapter! I just got interested in your story, and its really good! Some of those combos and battles I could imagine being in the Anime. Don't abandon this story, though I can't really say anything... just don't
| PokeNick12 chapter 55 . 1/24/2013
WOOOOOHOOOOO! Pignite finally evolved! Emboar . . I think the solarbolt(or thunder beam or solarthunder might blow up into simething nice like make an explosion of electrified sparks or streams of light. Melanie seems... strange. i dont know what i think about her. i think servine is almost either ready to evolve or mastered leaf storm. well monfernofreak, qnother nicely done chapter. keep up the good work.
| NameHikage chapter 55 . 1/24/2013
The whole story's cool!
| Guest chapter 55 . 1/23/2013
Your story is highly fascinating. Your doing a great job and I think how you describe the contest is nicely done
| Olimctrolly chapter 55 . 1/23/2013
Wow great triple battle loved it!
And yes finally an Emboar! one of my fav pokemon :)