|Reviews for Yours|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/25
Loved it! That was so cute! And love the possessive wally!
| Blue lightning 22xx chapter 1 . 4/26
This is amazing! Great work!
| BarbaraGirl chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
AW! Super fluffy sweet and cutesy without an underaged sex scene, cause sometimes those are blunt and unrealistic. Loved this!
| ahrua192 chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
Omg freaking adorable so cute! I loved it*_*
Writing is great though there are some "you're-your" typos and stuff like this, but this is still great and awesome and astrous like your other stories i was too lazy to review on which is mean i know so I'm sorry about it:(
But i really really love them and you're an excellent writer so keep writing and update all of your stories!
| RadicalKevin123 chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
| Angelic Sakura Blossom chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
That was awesome. And the make out scene? Really hot. I was a bit afraid this was going to go into M territory.
| Loopy chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
'But I won't hesitate, no more, no more,
It cannot wait,
Sorry, first thing that popped into my head when I read the last line.
This was really enjoyable to read. I love your writing! SHO MUCH!
And please update Giggles! PLEASE!
Also, it's so cute that Wally doesn't like other people using his name for Dick. Oh Wally, you are just too precious.
Overall, I loved it. You are a brilliant author.
| babyblue3752 chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
the ending! GAAAHH I CANT THINK ANYMORE.. CUTENESS OVERLOAD! i love this SO much. so cute and sweet and and and JUST WONDERFUL
| AnneSilverfire chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Ermahgad! That ending! Gaahhhhhhh do fraggin cute!
| grizzlybairparty chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
I love you forever now, because you wrote this beautiful, beautiful thing.
| Jesters of the Moon chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Liked it :) Kid Mouth was cute and Rob was super sweet :)
| Robin Red R chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Okay, first of all, I need to apologize for not reviewing this earlier. I've just been... taking a bit of a break from FF.N this last month, what with the new school year and selling my house and personal issues and... well that's not the point. Anyway, I'm so so very sorry I didn't get to this earlier, really I am. I decided it's time to go through my inbox and read all those new chapters and stories, so here I am. Especially since your work really deserves all the recognition possible... Please forgive me?
Now seriously. WHAT IS THIS. This this... I just died. That ending. My god. I love you.
Okay, *deep breath* gonna start from the beginning now. Ahh, it's so nice to read something where Artie isn't going all PMS-y at Wally. I mean, I love her when they bicker, but sometimes they have (relatively) companionable moments together like here, so thanks for that. Aosdjfs Assassins Creed, that's like the best video game ever :D
"Wally was about to combust from all the energy building up in him when he heard his salvation." That sentence. I dunno. It's like... so perfectly /Wally/. Love it
D'aww, Wally getting all flustered and jealous when he sees Zee and his mind going into superspeed overdrive... so cuute XD I seriously love jealous!Wally, and you wrote it beautifully here. NO. ZATANNA, NO. 'Rob' will forever be Wally's, don't you even dare XD Besides, I totally ship you with Artemis so go back to her XD
Is Lilly Rose an OC of yours? I don't know a canon character of that name but I may be wrong. She seems pretty cool anyway Wow, okay. Of all the directions I was expecting this fic to head, that was not expected at all. Wally hesitating to save Zatanna? I like that twist. Haha, Dick chucking a bat-a-rang at Wally is exactly the thing he would do XD
Oh Dick, you know you don't have to keep up the pretense when you're with your boyfriend... -sigh- All the stubborn Bat-kids who won't let anyone know when they're injured. But the fact that Wally notices it immediately is beyond sweet, considering Robin is, you know, trained by the Bats and all that. Wally's a lot more observant than one might think
Aww I mean, just aww. Dick telling him his name, just like that, and Wally doesn't make the connection at first and he's all excited about Bruce and the Batcave and then Dick shows his eyes and Wally's such a dork and then he realized and he's all awkwardly 'can I hug you' and ohmygawdwhatisbreathing.
...;n; Okay you're as gooood at writing beautifully smexy make-out scenes as you are at writing gorgeously sweet fluff. But the best part of that? When Wally is the big, responsible, mature guy that he is under the goof-ball personality, and he's the one that says they should stop before they go too far. That's just... I don't read that all that often in fics, but it just fits them perfectly. God it's perfect. Everything.
And now I'm back to where I started with WHAT IS THIS ENDING. And now I'm dead. With the absolute adorableness overload that just short circuited my brain. I love you.
Right so, this was veeery nicely written, with a great flow, as all your work is. There were a few grammar/mechanics mistakes, but I'm not going to point them out because they don't really take that much from the story so whatever. Great work! I hope this review makes up for my horrible lateness ;w; I feel so guilty...
Ohoho. I saw that. Thank you so much dear, I'm really glad my reviews are a help to you Reviews are what make FF.N go around, so I'm just here to do my part XD But thanks for dedicating such a BEAUTIFUL fic to me, that really means a lot. *huggle*
| TheSoldierProject chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
You have been on Twitter haven't you?
| Mistress of Solitude chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
This was wonderful!
I finally got my lazy ass to sit down, and leave a review
And I really liked reading this.
I also really like how you write both Wally & Dick. Pretty asterous if I must say so myself.
Congrats on being able to write an 8,000 word one-shot bout Birdflash. I'm almost jealous. I get distracted so I'm never able to write that much.
Though I did notice this slight error, here:
Wally grinned reassured. "So, what can call you then?" He asked, feeling Dick curl up even closer to him.
Should be this:
Wally grinned reassured. "So, what can *I* call you then?" He asked, feeling Dick curl up even closer to him.
All in all.
You've done a Great Job!
| OfMirthandTears chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
HAH cheesy ending:) But they're so cute. I just want to take them home and feed them soup!
I liked it, but beware of grammatical errors and awkward sentence structure. They plague even the best writers.