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gothicbutterfly95 chapter 11 . 8/20
What an adorable ending.
Them nearly missing breakfast, the exaggerated kiss, breaking the baby news, the boys saying there are enough girls, and that question!
And then ending it off with them talking about the future.
Beautiful story.
gothicbutterfly95 chapter 10 . 8/20
Crying when I read the letter. So beautiful, and such a brilliant way for her to tell him.
gothicbutterfly95 chapter 9 . 8/20
Wow, that was a twist I did not expect, but you pulled it off brilliantly. With everything that's happened it is believable that this could happen. And everything about this chapter was handled beautifully.
gothicbutterfly95 chapter 8 . 8/20
So, so beautiful.
gothicbutterfly95 chapter 7 . 8/20
What a beautiful, meaningful way to bridge her unconscious thoughts
gothicbutterfly95 chapter 6 . 8/20
OH HELP!
What an end to a far-from-wonderful day. I hope everything turns out okay
gothicbutterfly95 chapter 5 . 8/20
Wonderful. Just wonderful
gothicbutterfly95 chapter 4 . 8/20
The scene with the children was just lovely.
And oh, that dress again. What a brilliant, unique twist.
gothicbutterfly95 chapter 3 . 8/20
Yeouch!
That was harsh. But brilliantly written
gothicbutterfly95 chapter 2 . 8/20
Love the inner dialogue, and how she seems to talk to her mother. It's a nice little touch.
And what a great idea to make flowers if you can't pick any.
gothicbutterfly95 chapter 1 . 8/20
Ah yes...Given the circumstances it certainly isn't the best time.
Great beginning.
abbeye34 chapter 11 . 8/12
Please update!
Guest chapter 11 . 6/6
Loved your story.
twlightbella chapter 9 . 12/22/2014
Maria told george she was pregnant
twlightbella chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
Maria is six weeks pregnant
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