|Reviews for An Innocent Discovery|
| KimiD chapter 1 . 2/24
Oh, how I would FLOVE to read the unedited version...
WOW JUST WOW... Girl You know how to turn a page!
| Cina's chapter 22 . 12/16/2013
Amazingly sad... But loved it
| GottaHaveMyEdwar chapter 5 . 7/31/2013
That was fucking awesome! Thanks so much for this chapter. He has certainly made her his. Sweet!
| GottaHaveMyEdwar chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I think your story is beautiful and well-written. I think both the characters were surprised at the love and desire they had for one another. I is a sweet and sexy coming of age story. So wonderfully sweet. Anyone who thinks it is sick or screams pedophile, do not understand what you are trying to achieve/say in your story. It is great! Don't change a thing. Love you1 Mwah! :)
| Deanne Marie Cullen chapter 22 . 7/29/2013
Thanks for this chapter...I missed this story so much!
| Edwardforever2 chapter 22 . 7/19/2013
Well damn, very cliffy! I have read this entire story and I do not get why anyone would think this story is sick or bad! The one thing that God did not give us total control over is our emotions, for if he did no one would ever suffer from a broken heart. I am a believer in heaven and God, but I am also a believer in hell and satan. With that being said, I believe that the devil will always bring wrong thoughts to your mind, but it is up to us whether we act on them or not. This is what we call freedom of choice and Edward chose to deny himself what his mind and heart desired and not act on those thoughts and when he did act on them, he was well within his rights, emotionally, physically, mentally and LEGALLY! Little do some of these negative reviewers know some of their fathers, brothers, sons uncles, boyfriends, fiancés and husbands are looking or have looked at some point in their life at a younger, underaged girl and thought "damn if she was older I would ask her out"! Keep up the awesome job and please post ASAP!
| Edward's spouse chapter 22 . 7/17/2013
excellent. until next time.
| Evelyne-raconte chapter 22 . 7/17/2013
I'm so glad to read a new chapter of this amazing fiction. Thank you so much for sharing.
| Rita01tx chapter 22 . 7/16/2013
Somehow, I don't see the other kids at prom bein' so acceptin' of Bella bein' there with Tia's dad! Fingers crossed they have a great time anyway!
| robyn odei-ntiri chapter 22 . 7/15/2013
thank you for the update...Bella going to the prom with her man
| melissamary55 chapter 22 . 7/15/2013
love it and I hope bella goes to prom and then she and Edward move form forks and began again with out all the people loking at them wierd
| pauleen chapter 22 . 7/15/2013
These two are just so tempting. Good chapter.
| lilmstran chapter 22 . 7/15/2013
Can't wait to read more
| morena.davidson.3 chapter 22 . 7/15/2013
Thanks for sharing such a deeply personal and precious part of you with this story. I appreciate your honesty and commitment to tell this the way that is right for you. I am enjoying this story very much and look forward to the next update. :)
| rubell chapter 22 . 7/14/2013
sneaky edward, very sneaky...and now you are going to see up close and personal how hard of a time bella is having at school...