| Reviews for Naruto Guardian Of The Mist |
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   KillerDonut chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 i so cant wait for more chapters |
| iluvninjas chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 great beginning. but is this in Shippuden or what? |
| Leoni Liponscovi chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 AWESOME STORY! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ASE CONTINUE QUICKLY! |
| Mzr90 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 Hmm...intresting start I'm gonna keep an eye on this and as for possible harem choices I like to suggest Shizuka besides the contract they have would be funny for Konoha to see they lost their chance at a alliance plus Shizuka gave up on love and mainly focuses on her duities Naruto can help her past that also she uses wind release in uniques ways so she can teach Naruto that. |
| Darkryus chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 nice update soon |
| Miniwa chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 seems good now just have to wait for an update |
| ViresAdLegatum chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 It is an alright take for an idea. There are only three things I see wrong with the story. Your point blankness. You seem to rush through things and it takes a toll on those who read your stories. Your Vocabulary. There are some things that need to be described better than you have made them seem. This also joins to the first point. You can rush through things if you have a good vocabulary, but if you don't, then readers can misunderstand what is going on. Your basic idea in itself. While it is cool that Naruto has all these affinities, How does he have them. This will be a challenge later on to explain. Although I can't see how he could have them regarding the fact that you told us who his parents are. Now I like this story, but it does need a big improvement. I think I would like to adopt it, but you can continue, but I would like to see how I could write it. Is that alright with you? |
| The Darkest wizard chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 This is an interesting and good story! Please update soon! |
| bankai777 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 i hope that both shizuka and shion are in the harem reason being is that shion has a similiar burden like was scorned for her ability to forsee how a person shizuka she is trying to find true love again.i don't know if they are older that naruto but it could work. |
| ddcj1990 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 Nice good start to the story I really like the idea of Naruto having Ice, Lava and Boil release I cant wait for the next chapter also I think you should add Samui into Naruto harem because she is very calm and collective she would which Naruto can learn from her |
| Jose19 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 This is a excellent story all-around and I wish it to be updated as soon as you can. |