Reviews for The Hunter, the Avenger
Guest chapter 4 . 10/8/2016
great story, so diffrent
NoSugarForValdez chapter 4 . 4/4/2015
Guest chapter 4 . 2/23/2015
WAAAAAHHHHHH! How can you do this to me?! *SOB*
Guest chapter 3 . 2/23/2015
Artemis is gonna beat the crap out of him. I can't wait!
Guest chapter 2 . 2/23/2015
I don't know how people couldn't guessed that it was Zoe, but I still really like this. I'm tired now. *snore* (free birds anyone?)
Guest chapter 4 . 11/2/2014
But it fits that way! :(
mayram950 chapter 3 . 10/24/2014
i like the first two chapters better. this chapter is an entirely different story and an average guardian of the hunt/chaos story.
FallenRai13 chapter 4 . 10/18/2014
Let me know the squeal
Naviv chapter 4 . 9/3/2014
Nooooooooooooo! Lol
IchiIchi chapter 4 . 8/20/2014
Hope the rewrite works c: i liked the story so far c:!
Marmot95 chapter 4 . 8/9/2014
Please bring the Guardian part back into the story as falshbacks... this gets the Story a good background and especialy the Pertemis was nicely introduced...
it was short enough, that it is seen as intro, but long enough to be plausible.

I hope you rewrite it soon enough so i can enjoy the story soon...
till then Marmot
myra chapter 3 . 7/25/2014
you aren't consistent with your plot. in the last chapter the apollo kid's name was john not mark, the reason why percy left camp isn't the same and annabeth's behavior isn't consistent either. you're confusing me! unless i just ignore the flashback in this chapter (well, most it).
hyuuh chapter 3 . 7/25/2014
hyuuuh chapter 3 . 7/25/2014
why did it take so long for you to update and will you start updating sooner
prakhar.goel27 chapter 4 . 7/26/2014
Please don't discontinue the story it has a good plot and you are doing great with it
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