Reviews for Looking After Betty
evil ducks army chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
GAHH! what?!
Agentcaroline chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Omg, this just about brought tears to my eyes. My heart is breaking for Betty. :(
readingfrenzy chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Thanks for this. Because of your excellent writing, it was actually refreshing to read something free of Detty happy-ever-after fluff. I certainly agree with BtB...it is quite poignant. I hope that you continue this and make Daniel have an epiphany that Betty is deeply in love with him and the little void he is feeling without her-and will feel even greater when his honeymoon period is over-is that he is in love with her, too. Hope you write more soon. RF
Betty the Bonita chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Really well written, so poignant. Daniel seems to be sort of dense (no surprise). I'm not too thrilled with his insensitive treatment to Betty, but I actually think she did the right thing in leaving. He would just continue to be ignorant to her feelings for him and it's torture for her, so she needed a fresh start away from him and Rachel. I think Betty in the show might have done the same thing if she hadn't been with Matt when Daniel married Molly. Great job! Hope to see more of these!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
jesus...that was vomit inducing...he is such a chicken shit.
TMadison chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
This was so sad. I feel for Betty and Daniel here. I wish there were more. Please continue, if you can.
fenyx chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
loved this one, hope you will continue with more. nice to see that you are back, will this be more often?
Brenda chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
What? That's it. I need to know what happens later. I'd love if you could write like a sequel or something.