|Reviews for Looking After Betty|
| evil ducks army chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
| Agentcaroline chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Omg, this just about brought tears to my eyes. My heart is breaking for Betty. :(
| readingfrenzy chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Thanks for this. Because of your excellent writing, it was actually refreshing to read something free of Detty happy-ever-after fluff. I certainly agree with BtB...it is quite poignant. I hope that you continue this and make Daniel have an epiphany that Betty is deeply in love with him and the little void he is feeling without her-and will feel even greater when his honeymoon period is over-is that he is in love with her, too. Hope you write more soon. RF
| Betty the Bonita chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Really well written, so poignant. Daniel seems to be sort of dense (no surprise). I'm not too thrilled with his insensitive treatment to Betty, but I actually think she did the right thing in leaving. He would just continue to be ignorant to her feelings for him and it's torture for her, so she needed a fresh start away from him and Rachel. I think Betty in the show might have done the same thing if she hadn't been with Matt when Daniel married Molly. Great job! Hope to see more of these!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
jesus...that was vomit inducing...he is such a chicken shit.
| TMadison chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
This was so sad. I feel for Betty and Daniel here. I wish there were more. Please continue, if you can.
| fenyx chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
loved this one, hope you will continue with more. nice to see that you are back, will this be more often?
| Brenda chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
What? That's it. I need to know what happens later. I'd love if you could write like a sequel or something.