Reviews for Relentless Remorseless
wiccawhitewitchsmalltownguy chapter 3 . 3/2/2013
please continue the story it was amazing and the first worst witch fanfic that i ever read i like your stroy way better when will chapter 4 gonna be up please dont let miss harbroom die she was my faveroite in worst witch i wonder how it will effect cackle acdamey and her own time when constance return to the present
Princess Sammi chapter 3 . 10/15/2012
Ooooh absolutely amazing!

Had my attention from start to finish - it flowed so well, and the ticking of the clock and all the description just added to the already strong tension. I loved the explanation on Magic and its different types. That was very clever and each seemed to suit the type of witch like the Nightshades only 'touching' it when it became 'cool' to do so - seems very Enid, lol.

In Yew-Tree I can see faint elements of HB (in terms of appearance at least) and just reading it she seems capable of twisting someone's words through instilling fear.

Broomhead is back! Ooh goodie. I bet she knows a lot of what is going on and I still worry about the page in the sketchbook...

Keep it up!

Princess S

XxX
NCD Via Mob chapter 3 . 10/5/2012
Bloody hell, that was superb! I LOVED your take on magic and what it means to be a 'pure witch'; I loved the obvious reflection of Scarlett being Constance's muse - or close to, given her appearance. And I loved how you had the child's mind of Constance come across in your descriptions and dialogue. I thought your take on Constance's young character excellent and also your back-to-present-time take on Millie and co. Brilliant stuff. You really can write with spectrum opposite effect yet with the same quality. Bravo to you once again! NCD XXX
Guest chapter 2 . 10/4/2012
GOOD ATMOSPHERE. UPDATE SOON.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
AMAZING START.
DissectingPomegranates chapter 2 . 9/26/2012
*Waves*
WTF! I am generally shocked that I have not reviewed this earlier!
I am also equally shocked with this fabulous idea, instantly transformed and lost in my little world that you have perfectly set up here.
*gulps* I'm abit nervous about the path, we're all journeying down but also on the edge with the added mystery and suspense. Right now, it's not looking so good...only hope that good prevails over the evil once again

DP x
Princess Sammi chapter 2 . 9/17/2012
Sorry for the delay hun (I think it will be my new years’ resolution not to fall so far behind with reading fics!)

Oooh now this certainly has my attention. Brava so far. It's a very interesting and different idea, with fantastic writing and description.

{Depression is like a fine flower. The seeds of anguish and despair are planted and it grows and grows and grows until eventually it blossoms into something larger than life. The bees, they suck the life out of you and disperse your misery over different places at different times. Before you know it, the flower has consumed the field they were borne in. Nobody can recognise it for what it once was because what it once was is lost. It has been changed, it has been scarred beyond recognition. And like the grass that grows between the stems of gloom, nobody cares what lies beneath because the flowers consume you. They become you.}

{The truth about Constance was that her flower was once again in bloom, and it did not take a botanist to notice this. Amelia knew how to gauge Constance's moods. When she smiled, she was normally free from the catacombs of despair and when she was extremely moody and cranky, she was normally just getting ticked off with life - thinking it a tiresome business! But when she went silent - when she never raised her voice, made conversation or even give Davina ammunition to return to her cupboard, she had fallen.}

Such a good character description of HB, and also of those around her knowing her well enough to recognise the moods.

{"Do you ever have bad dreams, Amelia?" she finally asked.
"Naturally," Amelia replied.
"I mean something a little more serious than Mrs. Cosie closing down for the foreseeable future."
Amelia shuddered.}

LOL! We all love AC and her addiction to cheesecake ;)

{Memories are like wolves - they howl into the night and their echo lives and lives until the morning breaks}
Love that line. There is something so haunting about it.

Scarlett Yew-Tree is her nemesis. Oooh she sounds evil and that curse ... things don’t look too good for HB.

Love the idea of the sketch – how the most recent one lacks the power and life so to speak.

Oooh what an ending!

Can’t wait to see what happens next.

(I sincerely hope nothing happens to that page in the sketchbook or they are f**ked!)

Princess S
XxX
NextChristineDaae chapter 2 . 9/15/2012
Whoaaaaaaaaa! (Yes, Dorothy of Golden Girls strikes again!) Whoaaaaaaaho! Woman, that was magnificent! The sheer way you've woven the elements of your (fantastical!) ideas together is pure magic and I applaud you most assuredly for it! Your English structuring is that of a highly accomplished author; one who has more than one talent for writing, because you are managing to hit every possible angle. Truly exceptional work and the characterisations between Constance and Mildred are superb, as well as Mildred's little chat with Amelia (cheesecake, LOL!). Cannot praise you highly enough; you are MEANT to be a writer, undoubtedly. More soon, please!

NCD
XxX
Chrissiemusa chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
Another great chapter, excellent writing style and the flashback and use of phonetic spelling for accents was well done. I'm glad that Mildred decided to help, obviously not surprised that she would, and am looking forward to seeing how everything happens for the Academy and it's residents. Great job, brilliant idea and I can't wait for more :)
typicalRAinbow chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Blimey you have been busy! This is such a breath taking read and descriptions are gold. Good luck on Monday I look forward to more when you can :D
NCD via Mob chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Oh my ... Oh my ... OH MY! THAT. WAS. ASTONISHING! Where to begin?! Well, firstly, thank you so much for the dedication (and I could say the same about you! :) ), also, as you are aware, I'm doubly affected with extra problems right now, but this spectacular opening chapter has just proved to be the perfect medicine to help me along and detract from the pain. :D Now then ... Such outstanding work; truly avast feast of language to behold. Your poetic prose never fails to make my eyebrows raise in wonderment, and the bee anaolgy, little elements like the dreamcatcher, and Amelia's 'nightmare', lol, are what make your writing so appealing, because it shows your skills in grasping all the different elements of very different characters. The plot itself is both plausible and intriguing - indeed, I am very keen to read on despite being so drained - it would be SO worth it! Running out of letters but rest assured you are moving onwards with a flare of sheer genius, and I hope this flare guides you to the stars! xXx
Chrissiemusa chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Wow, very clever start and your power of description and your writing style never ceases to amaze. Really well done and I'd love to read more, as I'm sure quite a few others will as well :)

The description about depression is very true and comparing it with something as seemingly simple and beautiful as a flower created quite a parallel. The additional character descriptions in the beginning were wonderful and I can't help but wonder whether Broomhead had anything to do with Helen's death or Constance's revelation at the end. So many questions that I know will be answered.

Fantastic opening chapter, I look forward to seeing where you take this :)