Reviews for Major Trouble in Tokyo
jasmine chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
i think star should get her powers back i mean she and robin and bb rae cy dinnt do any thing to harm people they try to save them for about i just say about 25 years please if u dont mind can you do more chapters thanks jas
StayTraught chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
This is good! A few misspelled words and some missing commas. Try breaking it up and making sure that everything get capitalized that needs to be.