Reviews for Love Story in the Heavens
accioweasleys4 chapter 4 . 1/12/2014
Draco and Luna are one of my newest ships. I'm glad you wrote a story about them! I liked these drabbles very much. I'm glad you included the movie scene of when Draco stood by Luna after Harry "died"... this whole collection was sad and sweet. There were some spelling and grammar issues, and some words that should be capitalized. I would just look through the collection and go through them. Other than that, there weren't any major issues. I enjoyed reading all of these stories. I hope you write more!
percychased chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Very sweet and well-written; it's clear and easy to understand and flows very nicely. The characters seem a little OOC, but that might just be me... there's a bit of capitalization to be done and a little bit of grammar to be fixed, but other than that, I think you did a very spectacular job on this; probably one of my favorite Draco/Luna stories written, and I don't usually ship them often, so that's saying a lot. ;p

Again, good job!
Drunaforever chapter 4 . 3/3/2013
Wow this chapter was the perfect combination of Draco's personality and romance! It was amazing!
Francesca Salazar chapter 4 . 3/1/2013
The most beautiful letter in the world. Like it :D
Fire The Canon chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
I loved Draco in this! I absolutely positively adored Draco in this. He was wonderfully in character. I loved it.

Just watch for grammar and typos. Perhaps have someone look over it, or look over it yourself. Other than that, wonderful.
yellow 14 chapter 3 . 10/27/2012
Sweet. Keep updating
Francesca Salazar chapter 3 . 10/21/2012
It's great. Continue!
ManneVanNecker chapter 3 . 10/21/2012
So cute! I really like your drabbles :D Thanks for that! Have a nice day!
Drunaforever chapter 3 . 10/21/2012
Love this chapter! :D
still kat chapter 2 . 9/30/2012
I don't recall what Nargles do, but I'm pretty sure it's the Wrackspurts that go into your brain...Anyway, I liked it.
ManneVanNecker chapter 2 . 9/24/2012
:) so nice! Thanks for this! See you ;)
Drunaforever chapter 2 . 9/24/2012
This is a great chapter, love this story! XD
ManneVanNecker chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
So beautiful story, thanks for this :)
ASparkleOfSapphire chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L
magic doors chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Aw! That was really lovely:) I've never been a great believer in that pairing but I found you portrayed them and their relationship beautifully - it had a bittersweet theme to it. I especially loved their nicknames for each other in the letter at the beginning:) thank you for the submission and your score shall be PMd to you asap:D
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